That the species represented a transitional form between aquatic and terrestrial vertebrates was acknowledged by all ______ pinpointing its exact...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
That the species represented a transitional form between aquatic and terrestrial vertebrates was acknowledged by all ______ pinpointing its exact evolutionary position remained subject to intense debate.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
paleontologists:
paleontologists;
paleontologists,
paleontologists
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- That the species represented a transitional form
- between aquatic and terrestrial vertebrates
- was acknowledged by all paleontologists (?)
- pinpointing its exact evolutionary position
- remained subject to intense debate.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'That the species represented a transitional form between aquatic and terrestrial vertebrates'
- This is telling us what scientists believed about this species -
- that it was a transitional form
- meaning something in between water-dwelling and land-dwelling vertebrates
'was acknowledged by all paleontologists'
- So everyone studying ancient life agreed on this point
- The complete first thought is:
[This idea about the transitional form] was acknowledged by all paleontologists
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding what punctuation (if any) should come after 'paleontologists'
- Our options are: colon, semicolon, comma, or nothing
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'pinpointing its exact evolutionary position remained subject to intense debate'
- 'Pinpointing its exact evolutionary position' = figuring out exactly where this species fits in the evolutionary timeline
- 'remained subject to intense debate' = was still being argued about
So now let's look at the complete picture:
- First part: Everyone agreed the species was transitional
- Second part: BUT exactly where it fit was still debated
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The first part - 'That the species...was acknowledged by all paleontologists' - is a complete thought that could stand alone as a sentence
- It has a subject (the 'that' clause) and a verb (was acknowledged)
- The second part - 'pinpointing its exact evolutionary position remained subject to intense debate' - is also a complete thought that could stand alone
- It has a subject (pinpointing...) and a verb (remained)
- So we have TWO complete sentences here, expressing related but contrasting ideas
- They're connected in meaning (both about the same species)
- But they need proper punctuation to join them
When you have two complete sentences that are closely related, you join them with a semicolon.
So we need: paleontologists;
The correct answer is B) paleontologists;
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Joining Two Complete Thoughts with a Semicolon
When you have two complete sentences (each with its own subject and verb, each able to stand alone) that are closely related in meaning, you can join them with a semicolon (called independent clauses in grammar terms):
Pattern:
- [Complete Thought 1]; [Complete Thought 2]
Example 1:
- The experiment yielded unexpected results; the research team decided to repeat the trial.
- First part: complete sentence (experiment yielded results)
- Second part: complete sentence (team decided to repeat)
- Semicolon joins them because they're closely related
Example 2:
- Marine biologists tagged the whale in 2020; they tracked its migration for three years.
- First part: complete sentence (biologists tagged the whale)
- Second part: complete sentence (they tracked its migration)
- Both can stand alone; semicolon shows the connection
In our question:
- [That the species represented a transitional form...was acknowledged by all paleontologists]; [pinpointing its exact evolutionary position remained subject to intense debate]
- First part: complete sentence
- Second part: complete sentence
- Semicolon properly joins these related but contrasting ideas
Key point: Both parts must be complete thoughts. If one part cannot stand alone as a sentence, you cannot use a semicolon.
paleontologists:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used when what follows explains or elaborates on what comes before it
- Here, the second part doesn't explain what paleontologists are or elaborate on them
- Instead, it introduces a separate (though related) point about the ongoing debate
- The colon creates an incorrect relationship between the two parts
paleontologists;
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
paleontologists,
✗ Incorrect
- This creates what's called a "comma splice" - using just a comma to join two complete sentences
- You cannot join two complete, independent thoughts with only a comma
- You need either a semicolon, a period, or a comma with a coordinating conjunction (like "but" or "and")
paleontologists
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a run-on sentence by jamming two complete sentences together with no punctuation
- Without proper punctuation, readers can't see where one complete thought ends and the next begins
- This is a fundamental sentence structure error