The Alvarez theory, developed in 1980 by physicist Luis Walter Alvarez and his geologist son Walter Alvarez, maintained that the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Alvarez theory, developed in 1980 by physicist Luis Walter Alvarez and his geologist son Walter Alvarez, maintained that the secondary effects of an asteroid impact caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die _______ it left unexplored the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity might have also contributed to the mass extinctions.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
out but
out, but
out
out,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The Alvarez theory,
- developed in 1980 by physicist Luis Walter Alvarez
- and his geologist son Walter Alvarez,
- maintained that the secondary effects of an asteroid impact
- caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die out [?]
- it left unexplored
- the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity
- might have also contributed to the mass extinctions.
- the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity
- it left unexplored
- caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die out [?]
- developed in 1980 by physicist Luis Walter Alvarez
Where [?] = out / out, / out but / out, but
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence tells us about the Alvarez theory:
- developed in 1980 by a physicist and his geologist son
- The theory maintained something specific
What did it maintain?
- that the secondary effects of an asteroid impact caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die out
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- A: out but (no comma)
- B: out, but (comma + but)
- C: out (nothing)
- D: out, (comma only)
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "it left unexplored the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity might have also contributed to the mass extinctions."
Now let's understand what this second part is telling us:
- The theory (referred to as "it") left something unexplored
- Specifically: the question about volcanic activity's role
- The theory didn't address whether volcanoes might have also caused extinctions
So the complete picture is:
- First part: The theory maintained that asteroid impacts caused the extinctions
- Second part: BUT the theory didn't explore whether volcanic activity also played a role
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The first part is a complete thought:
- "The Alvarez theory maintained that the secondary effects of an asteroid impact caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die out"
- It has a subject (theory), a verb (maintained), and expresses a complete idea
- The second part is also a complete thought:
- "it left unexplored the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity might have also contributed to the mass extinctions"
- It has a subject (it), a verb (left), and expresses a complete idea
- These two complete thoughts have a contrasting relationship:
- The theory said one thing BUT didn't address another thing
- We need to show this contrast
When we're connecting two complete thoughts that contrast with each other, we need:
- A comma before the connecting word
- The word "but" to show the contrast
So we need: out, but (Choice B)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with a Comma and Coordinating Conjunction
When you have two complete thoughts (called independent clauses in grammar terms) and you want to connect them while showing their relationship, you need both a comma AND a coordinating conjunction:
Pattern: Complete thought, [coordinating conjunction] complete thought
The coordinating conjunctions are: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (FANBOYS)
Example 1 - Showing contrast with "but":
- Complete thought 1: The study examined sleep patterns
- Complete thought 2: It didn't account for dietary factors
- Connected: The study examined sleep patterns, but it didn't account for dietary factors
Example 2 - Showing addition with "and":
- Complete thought 1: The museum opened a new wing
- Complete thought 2: It attracted record numbers of visitors
- Connected: The museum opened a new wing, and it attracted record numbers of visitors
In this question:
- Complete thought 1: "The Alvarez theory maintained that the secondary effects of an asteroid impact caused many dinosaurs and other animals to die out"
- Complete thought 2: "it left unexplored the question of whether unrelated volcanic activity might have also contributed to the mass extinctions"
- Relationship: Contrast (the theory addressed one thing BUT not another)
- Connected correctly: die out, but it left unexplored...
Key point: Both the comma AND the conjunction are necessary. The comma alone creates a comma splice, and the conjunction alone without a comma creates a run-on sentence.
out but
✗ Incorrect
- This includes "but" to show the contrast, which is good
- However, when connecting two complete thoughts with a word like "but," you need a comma before it
- Without the comma, this creates a run-on sentence—two complete thoughts improperly joined
out, but
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
out
✗ Incorrect
- This provides no punctuation or connecting word at all
- The two complete thoughts just run together
- This creates a run-on sentence where the reader can't tell where one idea ends and the next begins
out,
✗ Incorrect
- This has a comma but no connecting word
- A comma alone is not strong enough to connect two complete thoughts
- This creates what's called a comma splice—using only a comma to join independent ideas