The ancient city of Pompeii offers archaeologists an unprecedented window into Roman daily life, preserved by volcanic ash in 79...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The ancient city of Pompeii offers archaeologists an unprecedented window into Roman daily life, preserved by volcanic ash in 79 CE. Throughout most Mediterranean regions, architectural remains from this period are _____ at Pompeii, however, entire buildings stand intact with frescoes, mosaics, and even wooden furniture surviving the centuries.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
fragmentary,
fragmentary;
fragmentary and
fragmentary
Sentence Structure
Sentence 1:
- The ancient city of Pompeii
- offers archaeologists an unprecedented window
- into Roman daily life,
- preserved by volcanic ash in 79 CE.
- into Roman daily life,
- offers archaeologists an unprecedented window
Sentence 2:
- Throughout most Mediterranean regions,
- architectural remains
- from this period
- are fragmentary [?]
- architectural remains
- at Pompeii,
- however,
- entire buildings stand intact
- with frescoes, mosaics, and even wooden furniture
- surviving the centuries.
- with frescoes, mosaics, and even wooden furniture
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence sets up the context:
- Pompeii is special because volcanic ash preserved it in 79 CE
- giving us an 'unprecedented window' into Roman daily life
Now the second sentence begins:
- 'Throughout most Mediterranean regions, architectural remains from this period are fragmentary...'
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding between a comma, a semicolon, 'and,' or nothing
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'at Pompeii, however, entire buildings stand intact with frescoes, mosaics, and even wooden furniture surviving the centuries.'
Now let's really understand what this complete sentence is telling us:
- The first part: 'Throughout most Mediterranean regions, architectural remains from this period are fragmentary'
- In most places around the Mediterranean, we only have fragments
- Incomplete pieces of buildings from this time period
- The second part: 'at Pompeii, however, entire buildings stand intact'
- At Pompeii specifically, it's different
- We have COMPLETE buildings, not just fragments
- The word 'however' signals this contrast
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The part before the blank: 'Throughout most Mediterranean regions, architectural remains from this period are fragmentary'
- Subject: architectural remains
- Verb: are
- This is a complete thought that could stand alone as its own sentence
- The part after the blank: 'at Pompeii, however, entire buildings stand intact...'
- Subject: entire buildings
- Verb: stand
- This is also a complete thought that could stand alone as its own sentence
So we have: Complete sentence [blank] Complete sentence
When you have two complete sentences that are closely related in meaning, you need proper punctuation to join them. A semicolon does exactly this - it connects two complete thoughts while showing they're related.
The correct answer is B (semicolon).
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Joining Two Complete Sentences with a Semicolon
When you have two complete sentences (each with its own subject and verb, expressing a complete thought) that are closely related in meaning, you can join them with a semicolon:
Pattern:
- Complete sentence; complete sentence
Example 1:
- 'The experiment failed, the researchers tried a different approach' (comma splice)
- 'The experiment failed; the researchers tried a different approach' (semicolon correctly joins)
Example 2:
- 'Many species went extinct during this period Pompeii's ruins survived' (run-on)
- 'Many species went extinct during this period; Pompeii's ruins survived' (semicolon provides proper separation)
In our question:
- First complete sentence: 'Throughout most Mediterranean regions, architectural remains from this period are fragmentary'
- Second complete sentence: 'at Pompeii, however, entire buildings stand intact...'
- Relationship: These sentences present contrasting situations (fragments vs. complete buildings)
- Solution: Semicolon joins them while maintaining the grammatical independence of each thought
This punctuation (called a semicolon in grammar terms) is especially effective when the second sentence contrasts with, qualifies, or expands on the first - exactly what we see here with the 'most regions' vs. 'Pompeii' contrast.
fragmentary,
- Creates a comma splice - you cannot join two complete sentences with just a comma
- Two complete thoughts need stronger separation: either a semicolon, or a comma with a coordinating conjunction (like 'but'), or a period
fragmentary;
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
fragmentary and
- To properly join two independent clauses with 'and,' you need a comma before it (should be 'fragmentary, and')
- Even with proper punctuation, 'and' isn't the best choice because it suggests simple addition, but these sentences are contrasting (most places vs. Pompeii)
- The sentence already uses 'however' to signal the contrast, making 'and' awkward and inappropriate
fragmentary
- Creates a run-on sentence - two complete sentences run together without any punctuation or connecting word
- Readers can't tell where one complete thought ends and another begins