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The Apollo 13 mission of 1970, a nearly catastrophic spaceflight that tested the limits of human ingenuity and _____ demonstrated NASA's ability to respond effectively to life-threatening emergencies in space.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

resilience, and

B

resilience,

C

resilience and

D

resilience

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The Apollo 13 mission of 1970,
    • a nearly catastrophic spaceflight
      • that tested the limits of
      • human ingenuity and resilience [?],
  • demonstrated NASA's ability to respond effectively to life-threatening
  • emergencies in space.
  • Where [?] represents:
    • A: , and
    • B: ,
    • C: and
    • D: [nothing]

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

'The Apollo 13 mission of 1970,'

  • This is what we're talking about - a specific NASA mission from 1970.
  • The comma signals that more descriptive information is coming.

'a nearly catastrophic spaceflight that tested the limits of human ingenuity and resilience'

  • This is describing what that mission was like
  • 'Nearly catastrophic' means it almost ended in disaster
  • It tested human ingenuity (creative problem-solving) and resilience (ability to persevere through difficulties)

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • They vary in whether we have a comma, "and," both, or neither after "resilience"

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

'demonstrated NASA's ability to respond effectively to life-threatening emergencies in space.'

  • This is telling us what the mission showed or proved
  • It demonstrated (showed) that NASA could handle dangerous emergencies

Now let's understand the complete structure:

What do we notice about how this sentence is built?

  • The core sentence is actually:
    "The Apollo 13 mission of 1970 demonstrated NASA's ability..."
  • Everything in the middle - "a nearly catastrophic spaceflight that tested the limits of human ingenuity and resilience" - is extra descriptive information
    • It's giving us more details about the mission
    • But it's interrupting the main flow from subject to verb
  • This interrupting description needs to be set off with paired commas:
    • Opening comma after "1970" signals: "here comes extra info"
    • Closing comma after "resilience" signals: "extra info is done, back to main sentence"

The pattern is: Subject, interrupting description, verb...

So we need just a comma after "resilience" to close off the interrupting phrase.

The correct answer is Choice B (resilience,) - just the comma, no "and."


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Paired Commas with Interrupting Descriptive Phrases

When extra descriptive information interrupts the main flow of a sentence - especially between the subject and verb - you need to set off that interruption with paired commas (called a non-restrictive appositive or non-essential modifier in grammar terms).

The Pattern:

Main sentence core: The Apollo 13 mission demonstrated NASA's ability

Interrupting description added: The Apollo 13 mission of 1970, a nearly catastrophic spaceflight that tested the limits of human ingenuity and resilience, demonstrated NASA's ability...

How it works:

  • Opening comma (after "1970") = signals "extra info starting"
  • Interrupting phrase = provides descriptive details about the subject
  • Closing comma (after "resilience") = signals "extra info ending, back to main sentence"
  • Main verb continues = "demonstrated..."

Why paired commas?

  • They work like parentheses - what's inside could be removed and the sentence would still be complete
  • Test: "The Apollo 13 mission of 1970 demonstrated NASA's ability..." Complete!

Common mistake to avoid:

  • Don't use "and" before the main verb - "and" connects parallel elements, not a description to the main action

In this question:

  • Subject: "The Apollo 13 mission of 1970"
  • Interrupting description: "a nearly catastrophic spaceflight that tested the limits of human ingenuity and resilience"
  • Needs closing comma after "resilience"
  • Then continues with main verb: "demonstrated"
Answer Choices Explained
A

resilience, and

✗ Incorrect

  • The "and" creates incorrect grammar here
  • "And" is used to connect two parallel elements or continue a list
  • But "demonstrated" is the main verb of the sentence, not another item in a series
  • You can't use "and" to connect a descriptive phrase to the sentence's main verb
  • This creates confusion about what's being connected to what
B

resilience,

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

C

resilience and

✗ Incorrect

  • Has the same problem as Choice A - the "and" doesn't work grammatically
  • "Demonstrated" is the main verb, not something being added to a list
  • Also missing the closing comma that's needed to complete the paired punctuation
D

resilience

✗ Incorrect

  • Missing the closing comma
  • When you open an interrupting phrase with a comma (after "1970"), you must close it with a comma (after "resilience")
  • Paired commas work together - you need both
  • Without the closing comma, readers can't easily see where the description ends and the main action begins
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