The archaeological site of Göbekli Tepe in Turkey dates back over 11,000 years. While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The archaeological site of Göbekli Tepe in Turkey dates back over 11,000 years. While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of _____ site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
agriculture. This
agriculture; this
agriculture: this
agriculture, this
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The archaeological site of Göbekli Tepe in Turkey
- dates back over 11,000 years.
- While most Neolithic settlements
- show evidence of agriculture [?] this site
- features monumental stone structures
- that predate agriculture.
- features monumental stone structures
- show evidence of agriculture [?] this site
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us the basic introduction:
- 'The archaeological site of Göbekli Tepe in Turkey dates back over 11,000 years.'
- This tells us about an ancient archaeological site in Turkey
- It's very old - more than 11,000 years
Now we move to the second sentence, which is where the blank appears:
- 'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture...'
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They're asking us to decide what punctuation should go here
- Period and start a new sentence
- Semicolon
- Colon
- Comma
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- '...this site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture.'
Now let's understand what this complete sentence is telling us:
- 'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture'
- Most ancient settlements from the Neolithic period had agriculture
- These were typical farming communities
- 'this site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture'
- But THIS site (Göbekli Tepe) is different
- It has big stone structures
- These structures came BEFORE agriculture developed
- This is unusual - most settlements had agriculture, but this one built monuments before farming even existed
So the sentence is setting up a contrast:
- Most Neolithic settlements → had agriculture
- This site → built monuments BEFORE agriculture
What do we notice about the structure here?
The sentence has two parts:
- 'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture'
- This part starts with 'While'
- That word makes this part dependent - it can't stand alone as a sentence
- It's setting up the contrast
- 'this site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture'
- This part has a subject ('this site') and verb ('features')
- It's a complete thought that could stand alone
So we have a dependent clause (the 'While...' part) followed by a complete thought (the main clause about this site).
When a sentence begins with a dependent clause like this, we need a comma to separate it from the main clause that follows.
The correct answer is D: agriculture, this
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas After Introductory Dependent Clauses
When a sentence begins with a dependent clause (sometimes called a subordinate clause in grammar terms) - a clause that starts with words like 'while,' 'although,' 'because,' 'if,' 'when,' or 'since' - you must place a comma after it before the main independent clause.
The pattern:
- Dependent clause: Starts with subordinating word, cannot stand alone
- Comma: Separates the introductory clause from the main clause
- Independent clause: Complete thought that could be a sentence on its own
Examples:
- Example 1:
- While most students prefer digital books, some still enjoy physical copies.
- Dependent clause: 'While most students prefer digital books'
- Independent clause: 'some still enjoy physical copies'
- Example 2:
- Because the experiment failed, the researchers redesigned their approach.
- Dependent clause: 'Because the experiment failed'
- Independent clause: 'the researchers redesigned their approach'
- In our question:
- While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture, this site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture.
- Dependent clause: 'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture'
- Independent clause: 'this site features monumental stone structures that predate agriculture'
Why the comma matters: The dependent clause sets up context or creates contrast, but it's not the main point. The comma signals where this introductory information ends and the main message begins.
agriculture. This
✗ Incorrect
Creates two separate sentences
Makes 'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture.' stand alone
This cannot be a complete sentence because 'While' makes it dependent - it needs to connect to something else
Creates a sentence fragment, which violates basic sentence structure rules
agriculture; this
✗ Incorrect
A semicolon can only connect two independent clauses - two complete thoughts that could each stand as sentences
'While most Neolithic settlements show evidence of agriculture' is a dependent clause, not an independent one
Cannot use a semicolon here because the first part isn't a complete thought
agriculture: this
✗ Incorrect
A colon is used to introduce explanations, lists, or elaborations where the second part expands on the first
Here, the relationship is contrast, not explanation (While X does one thing, Y does something different)
The colon doesn't fit this contrastive relationship between the two parts
agriculture, this
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.