The architect Maya Lin is best known for creating powerful memorial designs that combine natural elements with geometric precision—including the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The architect Maya Lin is best known for creating powerful memorial designs that combine natural elements with geometric precision—including the Vietnam Veterans Memorial in Washington D.C., the Civil Rights Memorial in Alabama, and ______
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The architect Maya Lin
- is best known for creating powerful memorial designs
- that combine natural elements with geometric precision—
- including the Vietnam Veterans Memorial in Washington D.C.,
- the Civil Rights Memorial in Alabama,
- and the Confluence Project in the Pacific Northwest [?]
- including the Vietnam Veterans Memorial in Washington D.C.,
- that combine natural elements with geometric precision—
- is best known for creating powerful memorial designs
Understanding the Meaning
Let's read and understand this sentence from the beginning.
The sentence tells us:
- 'The architect Maya Lin is best known for creating powerful memorial designs that combine natural elements with geometric precision—'
- This is a complete thought about Maya Lin's work and style.
- Notice that dash at the end? It signals that we're about to get additional information.
Then the sentence continues:
- 'including the Vietnam Veterans Memorial in Washington D.C., the Civil Rights Memorial in Alabama, and the Confluence Project in the Pacific Northwest'
- This is a list of three specific examples of her memorial designs.
- The word "including" introduces these examples.
This is where we have the blank - right after the last item in the list.
Let's look at our choices:
- A: dash (—)
- B: semicolon (;)
- C: no punctuation
- D: comma (,)
To see what works here, let's understand the complete structure!
What do we notice about how this sentence is built?
- We have a complete main sentence:
- 'The architect Maya Lin is best known for creating powerful memorial designs that combine natural elements with geometric precision'
- This could stand alone as a full sentence.
- Then we have a dash that introduces extra information:
- The dash signals: "Here are some specific examples!"
- The examples come in the form of a list introduced by "including"
- The sentence ends with this list:
- There's nothing after "the Confluence Project in the Pacific Northwest"
- The sentence is complete at this point
Here's the key: When a dash introduces additional information at the END of a sentence, and the sentence concludes with that addition, we don't need any closing punctuation. The sentence simply ends.
We don't need:
- A closing dash (only needed if we were returning to continue the main sentence)
- A semicolon (that's for connecting complete thoughts)
- An extra comma (the list is already complete)
So we need no punctuation - the answer is C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Dashes to Add Information at the End of a Sentence
When you use a dash to introduce supplementary information (like examples or additional details) at the end of a sentence, the sentence simply ends with that addition - no closing punctuation is needed:
Pattern:
- Complete main sentence — supplementary information added
- The dash introduces the addition
- If nothing follows, the sentence just ends (with a period)
- No closing dash, comma, or other punctuation needed
Example 1:
- The museum features works by three major artists—Picasso, Monet, and O'Keeffe.
- Complete sentence before the dash
- Dash introduces a list of examples
- Sentence ends with the list (no closing punctuation after "O'Keeffe")
Example 2:
- She had one major goal—to win the championship.
- Complete sentence before the dash
- Dash introduces clarifying information
- Sentence ends with that addition (no closing punctuation)
In our question:
- "The architect Maya Lin is best known for creating powerful memorial designs that combine natural elements with geometric precision" = complete main sentence
- The dash introduces specific examples
- "including the Vietnam Veterans Memorial in Washington D.C., the Civil Rights Memorial in Alabama, and the Confluence Project in the Pacific Northwest" = the examples that end the sentence
- No closing punctuation needed - the sentence simply ends
Note: You would only use a closing dash if you were returning to continue the main sentence after the interruption: "The architect Maya Lin—whose works include the Vietnam Veterans Memorial—continues to design today."
- A closing dash would signal that we're about to return to the main sentence and continue it
- But nothing follows this point - the sentence ends here
- Using a dash would create an incomplete structure that leaves readers expecting more
- Semicolons connect two independent clauses (complete thoughts that could stand as sentences)
- "including the Confluence Project in the Pacific Northwest" is not a complete thought - it's just the final item in a list
- A semicolon makes no grammatical sense in this position
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
- The commas within the list already separate the items (Vietnam Veterans Memorial, Civil Rights Memorial, and Confluence Project)
- Adding another comma at the end would incorrectly suggest that the list continues or that something else follows
- The sentence ends here, so no additional comma is needed