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The board of directors initially voted to expand operations into international markets through aggressive _____ pursuing a more cautious strategy of organic growth and partnership development after consulting with regional experts.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

acquisition; rather

B

acquisition rather

C

acquisition, rather

D

acquisition; rather,

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The board of directors
    • initially voted to expand operations
      • into international markets
      • through aggressive acquisition [?] rather pursuing a more cautious strategy
        • of organic growth
        • and partnership development
      • after consulting with regional experts.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's read through this sentence and understand what it's telling us:

The board of directors initially voted to expand operations into international markets through aggressive acquisition...

So the board made an initial decision:

  • They voted to expand into international markets
  • Their method was going to be aggressive acquisition (buying other companies)

This is where we have the blank - and the word 'rather' appears in all the choices. Let's look at what varies:

  • The punctuation before and/or after 'rather'

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

...rather pursuing a more cautious strategy of organic growth and partnership development after consulting with regional experts.

Now let's understand what this is telling us:

  • 'Rather pursuing a more cautious strategy'
    • The word 'rather' signals a shift or change from what was just mentioned
    • Instead of aggressive acquisition, they're now pursuing a more cautious strategy
  • 'Of organic growth and partnership development'
    • This describes the cautious strategy - growing naturally and forming partnerships
    • This contrasts with the aggressive acquisition approach mentioned first
  • 'After consulting with regional experts'
    • This tells us what prompted the change - they consulted experts first

So the complete picture is:

  • The board initially planned one approach (aggressive acquisition)
  • BUT they shifted to a different, more cautious approach (organic growth and partnerships)
  • The word 'rather' signals this important shift in their decision

What do we notice about the structure here?

Let me check both parts around 'rather':

  • The part before 'rather':
    • 'The board of directors initially voted to expand operations into international markets through aggressive acquisition'
    • This is a complete thought - it has a subject (board) and a verb (voted)
    • It could stand alone as a sentence
  • The part after 'rather':
    • 'rather pursuing a more cautious strategy of organic growth and partnership development after consulting with regional experts'
    • This is NOT a complete thought
    • 'Pursuing' is a participle (a verb form used descriptively), not a main verb
    • This is a phrase that shows the contrasting action

Since 'rather' is introducing a contrasting phrase (not a complete sentence on its own), we need a comma before it to signal this shift. We don't need a comma after 'rather' because it flows directly into what it's introducing.

The correct answer is Choice C: acquisition, rather


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Transitional Words that Introduce Contrasting Phrases

When you use a transitional word like 'rather' to introduce a contrasting or corrective phrase (not a complete independent clause) within a sentence, place a comma before the transitional word. This comma signals to the reader that a shift or contrast is coming.

The pattern:

  • Complete thought + comma + transitional word + contrasting phrase

Example 1:

  • The company planned to open five new stores, rather focusing its resources on improving existing locations.
  • 'The company planned to open five new stores' = complete thought
  • 'rather' = transitional word signaling the shift
  • 'focusing its resources on improving existing locations' = contrasting phrase (not a complete sentence)

Example 2:

  • She initially studied biology, rather pursuing a career in environmental policy.
  • Complete thought + comma + 'rather' + contrasting phrase

In our question:

  • 'The board of directors initially voted to expand operations into international markets through aggressive acquisition' = complete thought
  • Comma needed before 'rather'
  • 'pursuing a more cautious strategy...' = contrasting phrase describing what they did instead

Important distinction: If 'rather' were introducing a complete independent clause (with its own subject and main verb), you would use a semicolon. But when it introduces just a phrase, use a comma.

Answer Choices Explained
A

acquisition; rather

✗ Incorrect

  • Uses a semicolon before 'rather'
  • Semicolons are used to connect two independent clauses (complete sentences)
  • But 'rather pursuing a more cautious strategy...' is NOT an independent clause - it doesn't have a main verb
  • This violates the rule for semicolon usage
B

acquisition rather

✗ Incorrect

  • Provides no punctuation before 'rather'
  • This runs the contrasting element directly into what came before without separation
  • The sentence becomes harder to read because the important shift in decision isn't clearly signaled
  • Proper punctuation is needed to show the transition
C

acquisition, rather

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

acquisition; rather,

✗ Incorrect

  • Has the same semicolon error as Choice A (connecting to a phrase instead of an independent clause)
  • Also adds an unnecessary comma after 'rather'
  • The comma after 'rather' awkwardly separates it from what it's introducing
  • Creates choppy, incorrect punctuation
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