The Chrysler _____ an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930, remains one of the most recognizable structures in New York...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Chrysler _____ an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930, remains one of the most recognizable structures in New York City's skyline.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Building—
Building:
Building
Building,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The Chrysler Building [?] an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930,
- remains one of the most recognizable structures
- in New York City's skyline.
- remains one of the most recognizable structures
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'The Chrysler Building'
- This is our subject - the famous skyscraper in Manhattan.
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- Building— (em dash)
- Building: (colon)
- Building (no punctuation)
- Building, (comma)
So we're deciding what punctuation, if any, should come after "Building."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930'
- This is describing what the Chrysler Building is
- It's giving us extra information about the building's style and when it was finished
Then we see a comma, and the sentence finishes:
- 'remains one of the most recognizable structures in New York City's skyline'
- This is telling us what the Chrysler Building does - it remains recognizable
- 'Remains' is the main action verb of the sentence
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have the subject: "The Chrysler Building"
- Then descriptive information: "an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930"
- Then the main verb: "remains"
The descriptive phrase sits between the subject and verb, giving us extra information about what the Chrysler Building is.
- This is a noun + noun modifier pattern
- The first noun: "The Chrysler Building"
- The modifier: "an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930" - a noun phrase that renames/describes it
- When you place descriptive information in the middle of a sentence like this, you need to set it off with commas on both sides:
- Comma before the descriptor (after "Building")
- Comma after the descriptor (after "1930")
Notice that we already have the closing comma after "1930." So we need the opening comma after "Building."
The correct answer is D: Building,
This gives us: "The Chrysler Building, an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930, remains..."
Grammar Concept Applied
Using Commas with Descriptive Noun Phrases
When you have a descriptive noun phrase that renames or provides additional information about a noun in the middle of a sentence (called an appositive in grammar terms), you need to set it off with commas on both sides:
Pattern:
- Noun, descriptive noun phrase, rest of sentence
Examples:
- Without descriptor: My sister remains my closest friend.
With descriptor: My sister, a talented musician, remains my closest friend.- "a talented musician" describes "my sister"
- Commas on both sides separate the descriptive phrase
- Without descriptor: The discovery changed scientific understanding.
With descriptor: The discovery, a breakthrough in quantum physics, changed scientific understanding.- "a breakthrough in quantum physics" describes "the discovery"
- Commas on both sides set it off
In our question:
- Noun: The Chrysler Building
- Descriptive phrase: an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930
- Rest of sentence: remains one of the most recognizable structures...
- Result: The Chrysler Building, an Art Deco skyscraper completed in 1930, remains...
Key test: If you can remove the descriptive phrase and the sentence still makes complete sense, you need commas. ("The Chrysler Building remains one of the most recognizable structures..." ✓ Still works!)
Building—
✗ Incorrect
- An em dash can set off descriptive information, but you need matching punctuation
- If you open with a dash, you must close with a dash (not a comma)
- Here we have a comma after "1930," so we can't open with a dash
- Mixing punctuation marks (dash to open, comma to close) is incorrect
Building:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon introduces lists, explanations, or elaborations, usually after a complete independent clause
- Colons aren't used for simple descriptive phrases embedded in the middle of a sentence like this
- Additionally, a colon doesn't pair with a comma - the structure "Building: an Art Deco skyscraper, remains..." is grammatically incorrect
Building
✗ Incorrect
- No punctuation creates a run-on, awkward structure
- You can't place two noun phrases directly next to each other without punctuation when one is describing the other in this way
- "The Chrysler Building an Art Deco skyscraper..." reads incorrectly and doesn't signal the descriptive relationship
Building,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.