The city of Amsterdam partnered with consultants to develop Public Eye—an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring _______ video streamed from cameras in...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The city of Amsterdam partnered with consultants to develop Public Eye—an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring _______ video streamed from cameras in heavily touristed areas, the AI algorithm determines crowd sizes without, in the interest of protecting individuals' privacy, retaining the footage.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
system—analyzing
system, analyzing
system. Analyzing
system analyzing
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The city of Amsterdam
- partnered with consultants
- to develop Public Eye—
- an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring system [?]
- analyzing video streamed from cameras
- in heavily touristed areas,
- analyzing video streamed from cameras
- an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring system [?]
- to develop Public Eye—
- partnered with consultants
- the AI algorithm
- determines crowd sizes
- without, in the interest of protecting individuals' privacy,
- retaining the footage.
- without, in the interest of protecting individuals' privacy,
- determines crowd sizes
Where [?] represents:
- A: —analyzing
- B: , analyzing
- C: . Analyzing
- D: analyzing
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The city of Amsterdam partnered with consultants to develop something called "Public Eye."
The sentence then uses an em dash to tell us what Public Eye is:
- "an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring system"
- So it's a system that monitors crowds using AI
- and it's designed to be ethical
Now we reach the blank: "system [?] analyzing video..."
Let's look at the choices:
- We need to decide what punctuation (if any) should come between "system" and "analyzing"
- The choices give us: an em dash, a comma, a period, or nothing
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
After the blank, the sentence continues:
"analyzing video streamed from cameras in heavily touristed areas, the AI algorithm determines crowd sizes without, in the interest of protecting individuals' privacy, retaining the footage."
Let me break down what this part is telling us:
- "Analyzing video streamed from cameras in heavily touristed areas"
- This describes the process - the system analyzes video from tourist area cameras
- Then after a comma: "the AI algorithm determines crowd sizes"
- This tells us what the algorithm does with that video
- It figures out how many people are in the crowd
- "without...retaining the footage"
- This is the ethical part - it doesn't keep/save the video
- The phrase "in the interest of protecting individuals' privacy" explains why
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "Analyzing video streamed from cameras in heavily touristed areas"
- This is an introductory phrase describing HOW the algorithm works
- "the AI algorithm determines crowd sizes without...retaining the footage"
- This is a complete thought with a subject ("the AI algorithm") and verb ("determines")
- It could stand alone as its own sentence
- Looking back at what comes before the blank:
- "The city of Amsterdam partnered with consultants to develop Public Eye—an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring system"
- This is ALSO a complete thought - it could stand alone as its own sentence
So we have two complete, independent thoughts here:
- Amsterdam developed this monitoring system (complete)
- The system analyzes video and determines crowd sizes without saving footage (complete)
These are two separate sentences that need proper separation.
The correct answer is C: system. Analyzing
This creates two properly structured sentences:
- First sentence: Describes what Amsterdam developed
- Second sentence: Describes how the system works, starting with an introductory phrase "Analyzing video..." followed by the main clause "the AI algorithm determines..."
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Recognizing When Two Complete Thoughts Need Separate Sentences
When you have two complete, independent thoughts (each with its own subject and verb that could stand alone), they need to be properly separated. Using a period to create two distinct sentences is often the clearest choice:
Pattern:
- Complete Thought 1: Subject + Verb (can stand alone)
- Complete Thought 2: Subject + Verb (can stand alone)
- Solution: Separate with a period
In this question:
- Sentence 1: "The city of Amsterdam partnered with consultants to develop Public Eye—an ethical AI-powered crowd-monitoring system."
- Subject: The city of Amsterdam
- Verb: partnered
- Complete thought ✓
- Sentence 2: "Analyzing video streamed from cameras in heavily touristed areas, the AI algorithm determines crowd sizes without...retaining the footage."
- Introductory phrase: "Analyzing video..."
- Subject: the AI algorithm
- Verb: determines
- Complete thought ✓
- Result: These need to be separate sentences, so we need a period between "system" and "Analyzing"
Key insight: The comma after "areas" in the second sentence is correct punctuation for separating an introductory phrase (called a participial phrase in grammar terms) from the main clause. This comma helps us recognize that "Analyzing video..." is starting a NEW complete thought, not continuing the previous sentence.
system—analyzing
✗ Incorrect
- An em dash here would suggest "analyzing video..." continues describing the system
- But this creates a structural mess because after "analyzing video...in heavily touristed areas," we hit a comma and then "the AI algorithm determines..."
- This would create a run-on sentence with unclear relationships between parts
- The "the AI algorithm determines" clause has no proper connection to what comes before it
system, analyzing
✗ Incorrect
- A comma here attempts to make "analyzing video..." a modifier of "system"
- But then the comma after "areas" followed by "the AI algorithm determines..." creates a comma splice
- You can't join two complete thoughts with just a comma like this
- The sentence becomes a run-on
system. Analyzing
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
system analyzing
✗ Incorrect
- No punctuation makes "analyzing" seem like it's directly modifying "system"
- But the structure breaks down when we reach the comma after "areas" and then "the AI algorithm determines..."
- This creates confusion about sentence boundaries and creates a run-on
- The relationship between parts becomes unclear