The collection of Renaissance paintings at the Uffizi Gallery _____ works by Botticelli, Leonardo da Vinci, and Michelangelo, making it...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The collection of Renaissance paintings at the Uffizi Gallery _____ works by Botticelli, Leonardo da Vinci, and Michelangelo, making it one of the most important art museums in the world.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
include
are including
have included
includes
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The collection
- of Renaissance paintings
- at the Uffizi Gallery
- [?] works by Botticelli, Leonardo da Vinci, and Michelangelo,
- making it one of the most important art museums in the world.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
The sentence is about:
- 'The collection of Renaissance paintings at the Uffizi Gallery'
- We're talking about a specific collection
- It's a collection of Renaissance paintings
- This collection is located at the Uffizi Gallery
Now here's where we need to fill in the blank:
- 'The collection _____ works by Botticelli, Leonardo da Vinci, and Michelangelo'
Let's look at our choices:
- include (plural)
- are including (plural, progressive)
- have included (plural, present perfect)
- includes (singular, present)
What do we need here?
- The subject of the sentence is 'The collection' - that's singular
- 'of Renaissance paintings' is just a phrase that describes which collection
- It tells us what kind of collection, but it doesn't change the subject
- 'at the Uffizi Gallery' also just describes where the collection is
- So our verb needs to match 'collection' (singular)
We need includes - the singular form.
Now let's read the rest to see the complete picture:
- 'making it one of the most important art museums in the world'
- This tells us the result or significance
- Because the collection includes these important works, the museum is considered very important
The complete meaning: The Uffizi Gallery has a collection that includes works by these famous Renaissance artists, which makes it one of the world's most important art museums.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Subject-Verb Agreement with Intervening Phrases
The verb in a sentence must agree in number with its subject (singular subject = singular verb, plural subject = plural verb). When phrases appear between the subject and verb, the verb still matches the actual subject, not nouns within those phrases.
Pattern:
- Subject (singular) + describing phrases + verb (singular) + rest of sentence
- Subject (plural) + describing phrases + verb (plural) + rest of sentence
Example 1:
- "The box of chocolates is on the table."
- Subject: "box" (singular)
- Describing phrase: "of chocolates" (chocolates is NOT the subject)
- Verb: "is" (singular, matching "box")
Example 2:
- "The students in the classroom are studying."
- Subject: "students" (plural)
- Describing phrase: "in the classroom"
- Verb: "are" (plural, matching "students")
In our question:
- Subject: "The collection" (singular)
- Describing phrases: "of Renaissance paintings at the Uffizi Gallery"
- Verb needed: "includes" (singular, matching "collection")
The key is to identify the true subject and not be distracted by plural nouns (like "paintings") that appear in phrases between the subject and verb.
include
✗ Incorrect
- This is the plural form of the verb
- But our subject "collection" is singular
- Even though "paintings" (plural) appears between the subject and verb, "paintings" is part of a describing phrase, not the subject
- Creates a subject-verb disagreement: "collection include" is incorrect
are including
✗ Incorrect
- This is also plural ("are") when we need singular
- Additionally, the progressive form "are including" suggests an ongoing action happening right now
- But we're stating a fact about what the collection contains, not describing something in progress
- Double error: wrong number and wrong verb form
have included
✗ Incorrect
- This is plural ("have") when we need singular
- The present perfect tense "have included" suggests something that started in the past and continues or has recently completed
- But we're simply stating what the collection contains as a current fact
- Wrong number and unnecessarily complex tense
includes
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.