The corporation's sustainability report highlights the company's transition toward implementing _____ practices across all manufacturing facilities, a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The corporation's sustainability report highlights the company's transition toward implementing _____ practices across all manufacturing facilities, an effort that has reduced carbon emissions by thirty percent over the past five years.
Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?
renewable energy
renewable: energy
renewable; energy
renewable. Energy
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The corporation's sustainability report
- highlights the company's transition
- toward implementing renewable (?) energy practices
- across all manufacturing facilities,
- an effort that has reduced carbon emissions
- by thirty percent
- over the past five years.
- toward implementing renewable (?) energy practices
- highlights the company's transition
Understanding the Meaning
Let's read from the beginning:
The corporation's sustainability report is telling us about something:
- It highlights (draws attention to) the company's transition
- A transition toward doing something: implementing certain practices
- These practices are across all manufacturing facilities
Now here's where we need to fill in the blank:
- "implementing _____ practices"
Let's look at our choices:
- All of them include the words "renewable" and "energy"
- What varies is the punctuation between these two words:
- A: just a space (renewable energy)
- B: a colon (renewable: energy)
- C: a semicolon (renewable; energy)
- D: a period making two sentences (renewable. Energy)
What do we notice about how these words work together?
- "Renewable energy" is a compound term - two words that work together as a single concept
- "Renewable" describes what type of energy
- Together, "renewable energy" describes what type of practices
- This is like saying "solar power systems" or "digital marketing strategy"
- These are standard compound phrases
- We just use normal spacing between the words - no punctuation needed
So we need Choice A: renewable energy (with just a space).
Now let's see the complete picture. The rest of the sentence tells us:
- "an effort that has reduced carbon emissions by thirty percent over the past five years"
- This phrase describes the result of implementing these renewable energy practices
- It shows the impact has been significant - a 30% reduction
The complete meaning: The report is highlighting how the company has moved toward using renewable energy practices in all its manufacturing facilities, and this effort has significantly reduced carbon emissions over five years.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Compound Modifiers: When to Use Simple Spacing
When two or more words work together as a single unit to modify (describe) a noun, they often need no punctuation between them - just normal spacing. This is especially true for standard compound terms that function as recognized concepts.
The pattern:
- Compound term: renewable energy
- "Renewable" (adjective) + "energy" (noun) = a standard compound noun
- Functions as one concept
- What it modifies: practices
- How to write it: renewable energy practices (with just spaces)
More examples of this pattern:
- "The company adopted solar power technology"
- solar + power = compound modifier
- Describes: technology
- No punctuation needed between "solar" and "power"
- "The hospital improved mental health services"
- mental + health = compound modifier
- Describes: services
- No punctuation needed between "mental" and "health"
- "Scientists study climate change effects"
- climate + change = compound modifier
- Describes: effects
- No punctuation needed between "climate" and "change"
The key principle: When words combine to form a standard compound term or compound modifier, use simple spacing. Don't insert colons, semicolons, or periods within these unified phrases - they work together as a single unit to describe something else.
In this question: "Renewable energy" is a standard compound term that modifies "practices." The two words work as one concept, so we use normal spacing: renewable energy practices.
renewable energy
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
renewable: energy
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something - like a list, an explanation, or an elaboration of what came before
- You don't use colons within compound modifiers or compound terms
- "Renewable:" suggests something is being introduced or explained, but that's not the relationship between these two words
- This creates an ungrammatical, awkward construction
renewable; energy
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon connects two independent clauses - two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as sentences
- "Renewable" by itself is not a complete thought
- Semicolons don't belong within compound modifiers
- This is grammatically incorrect usage
renewable. Energy
✗ Incorrect
- A period ends one sentence and begins another
- "...toward implementing renewable." is an incomplete sentence - it's a fragment that leaves us hanging
- "Energy practices across all manufacturing facilities..." would start a new sentence awkwardly and would also be incomplete
- This destroys the sentence structure and makes the meaning unclear