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The documentary series examines the remarkable achievements of aviation pioneer Amelia ______ whose mysterious 1937 disappearance over the Pacific Ocean has captivated historians for decades.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A
Earhart,
B
Earhart
C
Earhart;
D
Earhart:
Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

• The documentary series examines the remarkable achievements
• of aviation pioneer Amelia Earhart [?]
• whose mysterious 1937 disappearance
• over the Pacific Ocean
• has captivated historians
• for decades.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The documentary series examines the remarkable achievements
of aviation pioneer Amelia Earhart

So we're learning that a documentary is looking at what Amelia Earhart achieved as an aviation pioneer.

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • They're asking us whether we need a comma, no punctuation, a semicolon, or a colon after "Earhart."

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: "whose mysterious 1937 disappearance over the Pacific Ocean has captivated historians for decades."

Now let's understand what this part is telling us:

  • "whose mysterious 1937 disappearance"
    • The word "whose" connects back to Amelia Earhart – it's HER disappearance
    • This is giving us additional information about her
  • "over the Pacific Ocean"
    • Tells us where she disappeared
  • "has captivated historians for decades"
    • Her disappearance has fascinated historians for a long time

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have a person's name: "Amelia Earhart"
  • Followed by a "whose" clause that adds descriptive information about her
  • This "whose" clause is providing bonus information:
    • We could remove it and the main sentence would still be complete
    • "The documentary series examines the remarkable achievements of aviation pioneer Amelia Earhart" stands on its own
    • The "whose" clause adds interesting extra details

When we have a name followed by a "whose" clause that provides additional, non-essential information like this, we need a comma to signal that we're adding descriptive information.

So we need: Earhart, (with a comma)

The comma creates the natural pause before the descriptive "whose" clause begins.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Descriptive "Whose" Clauses

When you have a noun (especially a person's name) followed by a clause beginning with "whose," "who," or "which" that provides additional, non-essential information, you use a comma to separate them. This type of clause is called a non-restrictive relative clause in grammar terms.

The pattern:

  • Noun + comma + descriptive clause

Example 1:

  • My sister, who lives in Boston, is visiting next week.
  • "My sister" = the noun
  • "who lives in Boston" = additional descriptive information
  • The comma signals the start of the bonus information

Example 2:

  • The novel, which was published in 1925, became an instant classic.
  • "The novel" = the noun
  • "which was published in 1925" = additional descriptive information
  • Could remove this clause and sentence still works: "The novel became an instant classic"

In our question:

  • Aviation pioneer Amelia Earhart, whose mysterious 1937 disappearance over the Pacific Ocean has captivated historians for decades
  • "Amelia Earhart" = the noun (person's name)
  • "whose mysterious 1937 disappearance..." = additional descriptive information about her
  • The comma properly introduces this descriptive clause

Key insight: The comma signals to the reader: "Here comes some extra information about what I just mentioned." If you removed the clause, the main sentence would still be complete.

Answer Choices Explained
A
Earhart,
✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

B
Earhart
✗ Incorrect
  • No punctuation fails to properly separate the name from the descriptive clause
  • The "whose" clause provides additional, non-essential information and needs to be set off with a comma
  • Without the comma, the sentence feels like it runs together without the proper pause
C
Earhart;
✗ Incorrect
  • A semicolon is used to connect two complete thoughts that could stand alone as separate sentences
  • "whose mysterious 1937 disappearance over the Pacific Ocean has captivated historians for decades" is not a complete thought - it's a dependent clause that relies on "Earhart" to make sense
  • The semicolon is grammatically incorrect here
D
Earhart:
✗ Incorrect
  • A colon is used to introduce lists, explanations, or elaborations in specific formats
  • While the "whose" clause does tell us more about Earhart, a colon doesn't work with this type of relative clause structure
  • The grammatical pattern of a "whose" clause requires a comma, not a colon
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