The hieroglyphics are ancient symbols ______ based on current research, represent one of humanity's earliest systems of written communication.
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The hieroglyphics are ancient symbols ______ based on current research, represent one of humanity's earliest systems of written communication.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
that:
that,
that;
that—
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The hieroglyphics
- are ancient symbols
- that (?) based on current research, represent one of humanity's
- earliest systems of written communication.
- that (?) based on current research, represent one of humanity's
- are ancient symbols
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence tells us:
- "The hieroglyphics are ancient symbols"
- Pretty straightforward - we're talking about hieroglyphics and identifying what they are.
Now we get more specific information:
- "that... represent one of humanity's earliest systems of written communication"
- This is describing WHICH symbols they are - they're symbols that represent one of the earliest writing systems.
This is where we have the blank - right after "that."
Let's look at the choices:
- We need to decide what punctuation (if any) comes after "that"
- The options are: a colon, a comma, a semicolon, or a dash
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- "based on current research, represent one of humanity's earliest systems of written communication"
Now let's understand what this structure is telling us:
- The main idea being communicated is:
- "that represent one of humanity's earliest systems of written communication"
- But there's a phrase in the middle:
- "based on current research"
- This is telling us HOW we know this information - it's based on current research
- Notice there's already a comma AFTER "research"
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "Based on current research" is an interrupting phrase
- It's adding extra context in the middle of the thought
- The main flow is: "that represent one of humanity's earliest systems..."
- The "based on current research" part is inserted to give us context
- When you have an interrupting phrase like this, you need to set it off with commas on BOTH sides
- One comma to open the interruption
- One comma to close it
- Since there's already a comma after "research," we need a comma after "that" to open the interruption
So we need: that, based on current research, represent...
The correct answer is Choice B: that,
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Setting Off Interrupting Phrases with Commas
When you insert a phrase that interrupts the main flow of a sentence to add extra information or context, you need to set it off with commas on both sides (called parenthetical elements in grammar terms):
Pattern:
- [Beginning of main thought], [interrupting phrase], [continuation of main thought]
Example 1:
- Without interruption: "The results show a significant improvement"
- With interruption: "The results, according to the study, show a significant improvement"
- Comma before "according to the study" opens the interruption
- Comma after "study" closes the interruption
Example 2:
- Without interruption: "The team completed the project ahead of schedule"
- With interruption: "The team, despite numerous setbacks, completed the project ahead of schedule"
- Comma after "team" opens the interruption
- Comma after "setbacks" closes the interruption
How this applies to our question:
- The main thought: "that represent one of humanity's earliest systems..."
- The interruption: "based on current research"
- Needs commas on both sides: "that, based on current research, represent..."
The key is recognizing when a phrase is interrupting the main flow versus being part of it. If you can remove the phrase and the sentence still flows naturally, it's an interrupting element that needs comma pairs.
that:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something - like a list, explanation, or elaboration
- "Based on current research" isn't being introduced; it's an interrupting phrase providing context
- This creates incorrect punctuation for an interruption
that,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
that;
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon is used to separate two complete thoughts that could stand as independent sentences
- What follows "that" is not a complete independent thought - it's part of the relative clause
- "Based on current research, represent..." cannot stand alone as a sentence
- This creates a fundamental punctuation error
that—
✗ Incorrect
- A dash can be used to set off interrupting information, but you need MATCHING punctuation
- If you open an interruption with a dash, you need to close it with a dash
- Since there's already a comma after "research," you can't open with a dash and close with a comma
- This creates mismatched, inconsistent punctuation