The Hubble Space Telescope has transformed our understanding of the universe since its launch in 1990. Among its most significant...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Hubble Space Telescope has transformed our understanding of the universe since its launch in 1990. Among its most significant contributions is the deep field image, a _____ reveals thousands of galaxies in what appears to the naked eye as an empty patch of sky, providing evidence that the universe contains billions of galaxies beyond our own.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
photograph that
photograph,
photograph
photograph, that
Sentence Structure
- The Hubble Space Telescope has transformed our understanding of the universe since its launch in 1990.
- Among its most significant contributions
- is the deep field image,
- a photograph (?) reveals thousands of galaxies
- in what appears to the naked eye as an empty patch of sky,
- providing evidence
- that the universe contains billions of galaxies beyond our own.
- a photograph (?) reveals thousands of galaxies
- is the deep field image,
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us context:
- The Hubble Space Telescope has transformed our understanding of the universe since its launch in 1990.
- This sets up that we're talking about Hubble's important contributions.
Now the second sentence tells us about one specific contribution:
- 'Among its most significant contributions is the deep field image'
- So there's something called the "deep field image" that's really important.
The sentence continues by telling us more about what this deep field image is:
- 'a photograph...'
- Okay, so the deep field image is a photograph.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- photograph that
- photograph,
- photograph
- photograph, that
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying:
- '...reveals thousands of galaxies in what appears to the naked eye as an empty patch of sky'
- So this photograph shows us thousands of galaxies in a spot that looks empty to our eyes
- This is explaining what makes THIS photograph special - what it does, what it reveals
- 'providing evidence that the universe contains billions of galaxies beyond our own'
- And this discovery provides proof about how many galaxies exist
Now, what do we notice about the structure here?
- The phrase "reveals thousands of galaxies..." is describing the photograph
- But it's not just adding extra information
- It's telling us WHICH photograph we're talking about - the one that reveals these galaxies
- This is essential, identifying information
- "Reveals" is a verb that needs to connect properly to its subject "photograph"
- We need a word that links the noun "photograph" to the action "reveals"
- When we have a clause that provides essential information about which specific thing we mean:
- We use "that" to connect it
- We do NOT use a comma before "that"
- The information is restrictive - it restricts which photograph we're talking about
So we need: photograph that
The correct answer is Choice A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Essential Modifying Information to Nouns
When you want to add a clause that tells you WHICH specific thing you're talking about - information that's essential to identifying the noun - you connect it with "that" and no comma. This is called a restrictive relative clause in grammar terms.
Pattern for Essential (Restrictive) Information:
- Noun + that + essential identifying information (NO comma)
- Example: "The book that changed my perspective was written in 1960."
- "that changed my perspective" tells you WHICH book
- Without this information, you wouldn't know which book is meant
- This is essential, so: that + no comma
Pattern for Extra (Non-Restrictive) Information:
- Noun + , which + extra information
- Example: "My favorite book, which was written in 1960, changed my perspective."
- "My favorite book" already identifies which book
- "which was written in 1960" just adds bonus details
- This is extra, so: which + comma
In this question:
- "a photograph that reveals thousands of galaxies"
- "that reveals thousands of galaxies" is essential - it identifies WHICH photograph
- The revealing of galaxies is what makes this particular photograph significant
- This is restrictive/essential information
- Therefore: that with no comma
Key principle: If you can remove the information and still know which specific thing is meant, use "which" with a comma. If removing it would make the noun too vague or unclear, use "that" with no comma.
photograph that
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
photograph,
✗ Incorrect
- The comma alone doesn't provide a proper connector between "photograph" and "reveals"
- This would leave "reveals" without a clear subject connection
- It creates a structural problem where the verb phrase isn't properly attached to the noun
photograph
✗ Incorrect
- Without any connector, this creates "a photograph reveals" which doesn't work structurally in this sentence
- We already have "is the deep field image" as our main verb structure
- Adding "photograph reveals" without a connector creates a run-on or confusing construction
photograph, that
✗ Incorrect
- This combines contradictory punctuation signals
- A comma before a modifying clause suggests the information is extra (non-restrictive)
- But "that" signals the information is essential (restrictive)
- Restrictive clauses introduced by "that" should never have a comma before them
- This violates the standard convention for essential modifying information