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The James Webb Space Telescope captured images of the galaxy cluster SMACS 0723 in unprecedented detail, revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial ______ the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

objects primarily because of its advanced technology,

B

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,

C

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology

D

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The James Webb Space Telescope
    • captured images
      • of the galaxy cluster SMACS 0723
      • in unprecedented detail,
    • revealing thousands
      • of previously unseen celestial objects [?]
        • primarily because of its advanced technology [?]
  • the telescope's infrared capabilities
    • allow it
      • to detect light
        • from the universe's earliest epochs.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The sentence tells us:

  • The James Webb Space Telescope captured images
    • of a specific galaxy cluster (SMACS 0723)
    • in unprecedented detail

revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial...

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • All choices begin with "objects" - so that word is certain
  • What varies is the punctuation:
    • around "primarily because of its advanced technology"
    • and what comes after that phrase

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs."

Now let's really understand what this complete structure is telling us:

  • "revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial objects"
    • This is telling us what the telescope discovered
  • "primarily because of its advanced technology"
    • This is a quick explanatory phrase
    • It's telling us WHY the telescope could reveal so many objects
    • It's an aside - additional information tucked into the sentence
  • "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs"
    • This is a complete thought - a full sentence
    • It's explaining WHAT that "advanced technology" actually is
    • It's giving us the specific details about the technology

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The phrase "primarily because of its advanced technology" is a parenthetical element
    • It's adding explanatory information
    • It should be set off with commas
  • The clause "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light..." is a complete sentence that's explaining something
    • It's telling us specifically what the "advanced technology" is
    • It's elaborating on the concept mentioned just before it
    • This is exactly what a colon does - it introduces an explanation or elaboration

So we need:

  • A comma after "objects" to start setting off the explanatory phrase
  • A colon after "technology" to introduce the specific explanation of what that advanced technology is

The correct answer is Choice D: "objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:"




GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Colons to Introduce Explanations and Elaborations

When you want to introduce a complete sentence that explains or elaborates on something you just mentioned, use a colon. The part after the colon should provide specific information or details about something in the statement before the colon (called an independent clause in grammar terms).

Pattern:

  • Statement mentioning a concept: The team succeeded because of their preparation
  • Colon + specific explanation: The team succeeded because of their preparation: they had practiced every scenario for three months

In this question:

  • Statement: "revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
    • This mentions "advanced technology" as the reason
  • Colon introduces the explanation: "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs"
    • This explains specifically WHAT that advanced technology is

Additional principle: Parenthetical or explanatory phrases should be set off with commas:

  • Without parenthetical: "The telescope revealed objects because of its technology"
  • With parenthetical: "The telescope revealed objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
    • The comma signals that "primarily" is adding emphasis/clarification
Answer Choices Explained
A

objects primarily because of its advanced technology,

"objects primarily because of its advanced technology,"
✗ Incorrect

  • Missing the comma after "objects" - this doesn't properly set off the parenthetical phrase "primarily because of its advanced technology"
  • Has a comma after "technology" which creates a comma splice - two independent clauses cannot be joined with just a comma
  • Doesn't show that the second part is specifically explaining what the technology is
B

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,

"objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,"
✗ Incorrect

  • Correctly has the comma after "objects" to set off the parenthetical phrase
  • But the comma after "technology" creates a comma splice - incorrectly joining two independent clauses with only a comma
  • Doesn't indicate the explanatory relationship between the technology and the infrared capabilities
C

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology

"objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
✗ Incorrect

  • Correctly has the comma after "objects"
  • But has NO punctuation after "technology" - this creates a run-on sentence by joining two independent clauses without any punctuation
  • Two complete thoughts must be properly separated
D

objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

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