The James Webb Space Telescope captured images of the galaxy cluster SMACS 0723 in unprecedented detail, revealing thousands of previously...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The James Webb Space Telescope captured images of the galaxy cluster SMACS 0723 in unprecedented detail, revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial ______ the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
objects primarily because of its advanced technology,
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The James Webb Space Telescope
- captured images
- of the galaxy cluster SMACS 0723
- in unprecedented detail,
- revealing thousands
- of previously unseen celestial objects [?]
- primarily because of its advanced technology [?]
- of previously unseen celestial objects [?]
- captured images
- the telescope's infrared capabilities
- allow it
- to detect light
- from the universe's earliest epochs.
- to detect light
- allow it
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence tells us:
- The James Webb Space Telescope captured images
- of a specific galaxy cluster (SMACS 0723)
- in unprecedented detail
revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial...
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- All choices begin with "objects" - so that word is certain
- What varies is the punctuation:
- around "primarily because of its advanced technology"
- and what comes after that phrase
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs."
Now let's really understand what this complete structure is telling us:
- "revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial objects"
- This is telling us what the telescope discovered
- "primarily because of its advanced technology"
- This is a quick explanatory phrase
- It's telling us WHY the telescope could reveal so many objects
- It's an aside - additional information tucked into the sentence
- "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs"
- This is a complete thought - a full sentence
- It's explaining WHAT that "advanced technology" actually is
- It's giving us the specific details about the technology
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The phrase "primarily because of its advanced technology" is a parenthetical element
- It's adding explanatory information
- It should be set off with commas
- The clause "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light..." is a complete sentence that's explaining something
- It's telling us specifically what the "advanced technology" is
- It's elaborating on the concept mentioned just before it
- This is exactly what a colon does - it introduces an explanation or elaboration
So we need:
- A comma after "objects" to start setting off the explanatory phrase
- A colon after "technology" to introduce the specific explanation of what that advanced technology is
The correct answer is Choice D: "objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:"
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Colons to Introduce Explanations and Elaborations
When you want to introduce a complete sentence that explains or elaborates on something you just mentioned, use a colon. The part after the colon should provide specific information or details about something in the statement before the colon (called an independent clause in grammar terms).
Pattern:
- Statement mentioning a concept: The team succeeded because of their preparation
- Colon + specific explanation: The team succeeded because of their preparation: they had practiced every scenario for three months
In this question:
- Statement: "revealing thousands of previously unseen celestial objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
- This mentions "advanced technology" as the reason
- Colon introduces the explanation: "the telescope's infrared capabilities allow it to detect light from the universe's earliest epochs"
- This explains specifically WHAT that advanced technology is
Additional principle: Parenthetical or explanatory phrases should be set off with commas:
- Without parenthetical: "The telescope revealed objects because of its technology"
- With parenthetical: "The telescope revealed objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
- The comma signals that "primarily" is adding emphasis/clarification
objects primarily because of its advanced technology,
"objects primarily because of its advanced technology,"
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the comma after "objects" - this doesn't properly set off the parenthetical phrase "primarily because of its advanced technology"
- Has a comma after "technology" which creates a comma splice - two independent clauses cannot be joined with just a comma
- Doesn't show that the second part is specifically explaining what the technology is
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,
"objects, primarily because of its advanced technology,"
✗ Incorrect
- Correctly has the comma after "objects" to set off the parenthetical phrase
- But the comma after "technology" creates a comma splice - incorrectly joining two independent clauses with only a comma
- Doesn't indicate the explanatory relationship between the technology and the infrared capabilities
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology
"objects, primarily because of its advanced technology"
✗ Incorrect
- Correctly has the comma after "objects"
- But has NO punctuation after "technology" - this creates a run-on sentence by joining two independent clauses without any punctuation
- Two complete thoughts must be properly separated
objects, primarily because of its advanced technology:
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.