The kelp forests along California's coastline create diverse underwater habitats, supporting sea otters, rockfish, and hundreds of invertebrate specie...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The kelp forests along California's coastline create diverse underwater habitats, supporting sea otters, rockfish, and hundreds of invertebrate species. These complex ecosystems have become a central research area for _____ at the Marine Science Institute.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
marine biologist: Elena Torres
marine biologist Elena Torres
marine biologist, Elena Torres,
marine biologist, Elena Torres
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The kelp forests along California's coastline
- create diverse underwater habitats,
- supporting sea otters, rockfish, and hundreds of invertebrate species.
- create diverse underwater habitats,
- These complex ecosystems
- have become a central research area
- for marine biologist (?) Elena Torres
- at the Marine Science Institute.
- for marine biologist (?) Elena Torres
- have become a central research area
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
The first sentence tells us:
- 'The kelp forests along California's coastline create diverse underwater habitats'
- These underwater forests are home to many different species
- 'supporting sea otters, rockfish, and hundreds of invertebrate species'
- This gives us examples of who lives in these kelp forest habitats
Now the second sentence:
- 'These complex ecosystems have become a central research area for...'
- The kelp forests are being studied
This is where we have the blank: 'for _____ at the Marine Science Institute.'
Let's look at our choices:
- A uses a colon between "marine biologist" and "Elena Torres"
- B has no punctuation between them
- C has commas before and after "Elena Torres"
- D has a comma only before "Elena Torres"
To see what works here, let's understand what these two pieces of information are doing together!
We have:
- 'marine biologist' – a general job title
- 'Elena Torres' – a specific person's name
What do we notice about the structure here?
The name is directly identifying which marine biologist we're talking about:
- The two pieces work together as a single unit
- Like saying "Professor Smith" or "Doctor Martinez"
- The name tells us which marine biologist, not extra information about one we already know
- This is essential information:
- Without the name, we wouldn't know which marine biologist
- The name isn't a side note – it's the identification itself
When a name directly follows a title like this to specify who we're talking about, we don't use any punctuation between them.
So we need: marine biologist Elena Torres (no punctuation).
The answer is Choice B.
Grammar Concept Applied
Essential Identification: Title + Name Without Punctuation
When a specific name directly follows a general title and identifies which person you're talking about, no punctuation is used between them. The title and name work together as a single identifying unit.
Pattern:
- Title + Name (essential identification): marine biologist Elena Torres
- The name is essential - it tells us which marine biologist
- No punctuation between title and name
- Like: Professor Martinez, Captain Reynolds, Senator Harris
This is different from adding a name as extra information:
- The [title], [Name], (nonessential information): The marine biologist, Elena Torres, has published extensively...
- Here "the marine biologist" already identifies the person
- The name is extra information (called an appositive in grammar terms)
- Requires commas on both sides
In our question:
- "for marine biologist Elena Torres" - the name identifies which marine biologist
- Essential information → no punctuation
- They form one identification unit
marine biologist: Elena Torres
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce a list, explanation, or elaboration that follows
- Here, "Elena Torres" isn't explaining what a marine biologist is – it's simply telling us which specific person we're talking about
- This creates an incorrect use of the colon
marine biologist Elena Torres
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
marine biologist, Elena Torres,
✗ Incorrect
- The commas on both sides would treat "Elena Torres" as nonessential, extra information
- But the name IS essential – without it, we don't know which marine biologist the sentence is referring to
- This punctuation pattern would only work if we said "the marine biologist, Elena Torres," where we're adding a name to someone already identified
- Creates unnecessary and incorrect punctuation
marine biologist, Elena Torres
✗ Incorrect
- The single comma creates an awkward, incorrect break between the title and name
- If the name were meant to be set off as extra information, it would need commas on both sides
- This disrupts the natural flow of the title-name unit