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The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species. For instance, the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii) can survive for a little over a ______ the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus) boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

decade: while

B

decade. While

C

decade; while

D

decade, while

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species.
  • For instance,
    • the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii)
      • can survive
        • for a little over a decade (?) while
          • the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus)
            • boasts a maximum life span
              • of about two centuries.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The first sentence sets up the topic:

  • "The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species."
    • So different types of rockfish live for very different amounts of time.

Now the passage gives us specific examples:

  • "For instance, the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii) can survive for a little over a decade"
    • One type lives for just over 10 years.

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • We're deciding between different punctuation marks (colon, period, semicolon, or comma)
  • And whether "while" should be capitalized or not

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

  • "while the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus) boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries"
    • A different type of rockfish can live for about 200 years!

So the complete picture is:

  • The passage is contrasting two very different lifespans
    • Calico rockfish: just over a decade
    • Rougheye rockfish: about two centuries
  • The word "while" here means "whereas" – it's showing the contrast between these two fish

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have two parts being contrasted in a single sentence:
    • First part: "the colorful calico rockfish can survive for a little over a decade"
      • This is a complete thought
    • Second part: "while the rougheye rockfish boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries"
      • This is the contrasting information, introduced by "while"
  • These two contrasting pieces belong together in one sentence
    • They're comparing the lifespans side by side
    • "While" (meaning "whereas") is connecting them

When you're joining two parts of a sentence with a contrasting word like "while," you use a comma before it.

So we need: comma + lowercase "while" → Answer D


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Contrasting Conjunctions

When you want to contrast two pieces of information within a single sentence using "while" (meaning "whereas"), you place a comma before "while":

Pattern:

  • First statement + comma + while + contrasting statement

Example 1:

  • "The first method is quick and easy, while the second method is slow but more accurate."
  • First statement: The first method is quick and easy
  • Comma signals the contrast is coming
  • "While" introduces the contrasting information
  • Second statement: the second method is slow but more accurate

Example 2:

  • "Some students prefer studying in groups, while others work better alone."
  • The comma before "while" connects two contrasting preferences

In our question:

  • "The colorful calico rockfish can survive for a little over a decade, while the rougheye rockfish boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries."
  • First statement: calico rockfish lives just over 10 years
  • Comma + "while" signals the contrast
  • Second statement: rougheye rockfish lives about 200 years
  • The comma properly joins these contrasting lifespans in one sentence
Answer Choices Explained
A

decade: while

✗ Incorrect

  • A colon is used to introduce an explanation, elaboration, or list of what came before
  • Here, the rougheye rockfish information isn't explaining what "a decade" means – it's providing a contrasting example with a completely different fish
  • This misuses the colon's purpose
B

decade. While

✗ Incorrect

  • This splits the information into two separate sentences
  • But these two pieces of information are meant to be compared directly in a single sentence – that's the whole point of using "while"
  • Separating them weakens the contrast and creates an awkward structure
  • Starting a sentence with "While" in this context sounds incomplete
C

decade; while

✗ Incorrect

  • Semicolons are used to connect two independent clauses (complete thoughts that could stand alone)
  • "While the rougheye rockfish boasts..." is not independent – the word "while" at the beginning makes it dependent on the first part
  • You cannot use a semicolon before a dependent clause
  • This violates the fundamental rule of semicolon usage
D

decade, while

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
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