The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species. For instance, the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii) can survive for...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species. For instance, the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii) can survive for a little over a ______ the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus) boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
decade: while
decade. While
decade; while
decade, while
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species.
- For instance,
- the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii)
- can survive
- for a little over a decade (?) while
- the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus)
- boasts a maximum life span
- of about two centuries.
- boasts a maximum life span
- the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus)
- for a little over a decade (?) while
- can survive
- the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii)
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The first sentence sets up the topic:
- "The life spans of rockfish vary greatly by species."
- So different types of rockfish live for very different amounts of time.
Now the passage gives us specific examples:
- "For instance, the colorful calico rockfish (Sebastes dallii) can survive for a little over a decade"
- One type lives for just over 10 years.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding between different punctuation marks (colon, period, semicolon, or comma)
- And whether "while" should be capitalized or not
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- "while the rougheye rockfish (Sebastes aleutianus) boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries"
- A different type of rockfish can live for about 200 years!
So the complete picture is:
- The passage is contrasting two very different lifespans
- Calico rockfish: just over a decade
- Rougheye rockfish: about two centuries
- The word "while" here means "whereas" – it's showing the contrast between these two fish
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two parts being contrasted in a single sentence:
- First part: "the colorful calico rockfish can survive for a little over a decade"
- This is a complete thought
- Second part: "while the rougheye rockfish boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries"
- This is the contrasting information, introduced by "while"
- First part: "the colorful calico rockfish can survive for a little over a decade"
- These two contrasting pieces belong together in one sentence
- They're comparing the lifespans side by side
- "While" (meaning "whereas") is connecting them
When you're joining two parts of a sentence with a contrasting word like "while," you use a comma before it.
So we need: comma + lowercase "while" → Answer D
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Contrasting Conjunctions
When you want to contrast two pieces of information within a single sentence using "while" (meaning "whereas"), you place a comma before "while":
Pattern:
- First statement + comma + while + contrasting statement
Example 1:
- "The first method is quick and easy, while the second method is slow but more accurate."
- First statement: The first method is quick and easy
- Comma signals the contrast is coming
- "While" introduces the contrasting information
- Second statement: the second method is slow but more accurate
Example 2:
- "Some students prefer studying in groups, while others work better alone."
- The comma before "while" connects two contrasting preferences
In our question:
- "The colorful calico rockfish can survive for a little over a decade, while the rougheye rockfish boasts a maximum life span of about two centuries."
- First statement: calico rockfish lives just over 10 years
- Comma + "while" signals the contrast
- Second statement: rougheye rockfish lives about 200 years
- The comma properly joins these contrasting lifespans in one sentence
decade: while
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce an explanation, elaboration, or list of what came before
- Here, the rougheye rockfish information isn't explaining what "a decade" means – it's providing a contrasting example with a completely different fish
- This misuses the colon's purpose
decade. While
✗ Incorrect
- This splits the information into two separate sentences
- But these two pieces of information are meant to be compared directly in a single sentence – that's the whole point of using "while"
- Separating them weakens the contrast and creates an awkward structure
- Starting a sentence with "While" in this context sounds incomplete
decade; while
✗ Incorrect
- Semicolons are used to connect two independent clauses (complete thoughts that could stand alone)
- "While the rougheye rockfish boasts..." is not independent – the word "while" at the beginning makes it dependent on the first part
- You cannot use a semicolon before a dependent clause
- This violates the fundamental rule of semicolon usage
decade, while
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.