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The marine research team has published five groundbreaking papers on coral reef restoration this year, drawing international attention to their innovative techniques. Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo _____ doesn't accept recognition exclusively for these achievements, which represent collaborative efforts involving dozens of researchers across seven different universities.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

exclusively, however;

B

exclusively; however,

C

exclusively, however,

D

exclusively however

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!


Sentence Structure

  • The marine research team has published five groundbreaking papers on coral reef restoration this year,
    • drawing international attention to their innovative techniques.
  • Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo exclusively [?, however,/?; however,?] doesn't accept recognition
    • for these achievements,
      • which represent collaborative efforts
        • involving dozens of researchers
          • across seven different universities.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's read from the beginning:

The first sentence tells us:

  • The marine research team published five groundbreaking papers on coral reef restoration this year
  • These papers drew international attention to their innovative techniques

Now the second sentence introduces us to the lead scientist:

  • "Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo..."

This is where we have the blank.

Let's look at the choices:

  • All of them include "exclusively, however"
  • They differ in how these words are punctuated:
    • Where commas vs. semicolons are placed around "however"

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • "doesn't accept recognition for these achievements"
    • Dr. Okonkwo doesn't accept recognition for these achievements
    • (The word "exclusively" that comes before "however" emphasizes this point)
  • "which represent collaborative efforts involving dozens of researchers across seven different universities"
    • The achievements were collaborative - many researchers were involved
    • Not just Dr. Okonkwo alone

So the complete picture is:

  • Despite being the lead scientist on this attention-getting work,
  • Dr. Okonkwo (however) doesn't accept recognition just for himself
  • Because these achievements represent collaborative work by many researchers

What do we notice about the structure here?

The word "however" is being used as an interrupting or contrasting element:

  • It's providing contrast within the flow of a single sentence
  • It's not connecting two separate complete thoughts with a semicolon
  • It's inserted into the middle of the sentence structure: "Dr. James Okonkwo [interrupting word] doesn't accept recognition..."

When a word like "however" interrupts the flow of a sentence this way, it needs to be set off by commas on BOTH sides:

  • One comma before it: "exclusively, however"
  • One comma after it: "however, doesn't"

So we need: exclusively, however, (Choice C)

This creates the proper punctuation: "Dr. James Okonkwo, exclusively, however, doesn't accept recognition for these achievements..."


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Punctuating "However" in the Middle of a Sentence

When you use "however" as an interrupting word in the middle of a sentence - to show contrast or provide a transition within your thought - you need to set it off with commas on both sides.

The pattern:

  • Subject, however, verb + rest of sentence

Examples:

Example 1:

  • The scientist, however, disagreed with the findings.
  • "However" interrupts between the subject and verb
  • Commas on both sides

Example 2:

  • The results, however, contradicted earlier studies.
  • "However" interrupts between the subject and verb
  • Commas before and after

In our question:

  • Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo, exclusively, however, doesn't accept recognition...
  • "However" is an interrupting contrasting element
  • It needs commas on both sides: ", however,"

Important distinction:

  • This is different from using "however" to connect two independent clauses
  • When connecting two complete thoughts, you use: Independent clause; however, independent clause.
  • But when "however" interrupts within a single sentence structure, you use commas: Subject, however, verb...
Answer Choices Explained
A

exclusively, however;

✗ Incorrect

  • Uses a semicolon after "however"
  • Semicolons are used to separate two independent clauses (two complete thoughts that could stand alone as sentences)
  • But "doesn't accept recognition for these achievements" is not a new independent clause - it's the continuation of the same sentence that began with "Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo"
  • The semicolon incorrectly breaks up what should be one flowing sentence
B

exclusively; however,

✗ Incorrect

  • Places a semicolon before "however"
  • This would only be correct if "Lead scientist Dr. James Okonkwo exclusively" were a complete independent clause
  • But it's not - it's a fragment (it has a subject "Dr. James Okonkwo" but no verb yet)
  • You cannot use a semicolon after a fragment; semicolons only separate complete thoughts
C

exclusively, however,

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
D

exclusively however

✗ Incorrect

  • Provides no punctuation around "however"
  • When "however" appears in the middle of a sentence as a transitional or contrasting word, it must be set off by commas
  • Without commas, the sentence runs together awkwardly
  • The lack of punctuation fails to signal the interrupting/contrasting function of "however"
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