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The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior across multiple platforms. She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by ______ and her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

demographic

B

demographic,

C

demographic:

D

demographic;

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior
  • across multiple platforms.
  • She discovered
  • that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic[?]
  • and her team identified three key factors
  • influencing purchase decisions.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The first sentence tells us:

  • "The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior across multiple platforms"
    • She studied how consumers behave on different platforms (social media, websites, etc.)

Now the second sentence:

  • "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
    • She found out that different demographic groups (age groups, income levels, etc.) engage at very different rates

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • We're deciding what punctuation (if any) should follow "demographic"
  • Options are: nothing, comma, colon, or semicolon

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

  • "and her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
    • This tells us another action - what her team did
    • They identified factors that influence whether people buy

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have two complete thoughts being connected by "and":

    First complete thought:
    • "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
      • Subject: She
      • Verb: discovered
      • This could stand alone as a sentence ✓

    Second complete thought:
    • "her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
      • Subject: her team
      • Verb: identified
      • This could also stand alone as a sentence ✓
  • When we connect two complete thoughts with a connecting word like "and," we need a comma before the "and"
  • This is the standard pattern: [complete thought], and [complete thought]

So we need a comma after "demographic" - before the word "and."

The correct answer is B: demographic,


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with "And"

When you want to combine two complete thoughts (each with its own subject and verb that could stand alone as a sentence) using a connecting word like "and," you need a comma before the "and." These connecting words are called coordinating conjunctions in grammar terms (and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet).

The pattern:

  • [Complete thought], and [complete thought]

Examples:

  • Two separate sentences:
    • The study revealed surprising results. The researchers published their findings immediately.
  • Combined with comma + and:
    • The study revealed surprising results, and the researchers published their findings immediately.
      • First complete thought: "The study revealed surprising results" (subject = study, verb = revealed)
      • Second complete thought: "the researchers published their findings immediately" (subject = researchers, verb = published)
      • Comma before "and" connects them properly

In our question:

  • First complete thought: "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
  • Second complete thought: "her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
  • Proper connection: demographic, and her team...

Why the comma matters:

Without it, you create a run-on sentence - two complete thoughts improperly joined. The comma signals to the reader that one complete idea is ending and another is beginning, making the sentence structure clear and correct.

Answer Choices Explained
A

demographic

✗ Incorrect

  • Creates a run-on sentence
  • Two complete thoughts cannot be joined by just "and" alone - they need a comma before the coordinating conjunction
  • Without the comma, this violates the rules for connecting independent clauses
B

demographic,

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
C

demographic:

✗ Incorrect

  • A colon is used to introduce something that explains, lists, or elaborates on what came before
  • "Her team identified three key factors" is not explaining what "engagement rates varied by demographic" means
  • It's a separate, parallel action that happened - not a clarification or explanation
  • The colon creates the wrong relationship between these two ideas
D

demographic;

✗ Incorrect

  • A semicolon is used to connect two complete thoughts WITHOUT a conjunction
  • Here we already have the conjunction "and"
  • When you have "and" (or another coordinating conjunction), you need a comma before it, not a semicolon
  • The semicolon would work if we removed "and" (like: "...by demographic; her team identified..."), but that's not the structure we have
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