The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior across multiple platforms. She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by ______ and h...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior across multiple platforms. She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by ______ and her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
demographic
demographic,
demographic:
demographic;
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior
- across multiple platforms.
- She discovered
- that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic[?]
- and her team identified three key factors
- influencing purchase decisions.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The first sentence tells us:
- "The marketing director analyzed consumer behavior across multiple platforms"
- She studied how consumers behave on different platforms (social media, websites, etc.)
Now the second sentence:
- "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
- She found out that different demographic groups (age groups, income levels, etc.) engage at very different rates
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding what punctuation (if any) should follow "demographic"
- Options are: nothing, comma, colon, or semicolon
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- "and her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
- This tells us another action - what her team did
- They identified factors that influence whether people buy
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two complete thoughts being connected by "and":
First complete thought:- "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
- Subject: She
- Verb: discovered
- This could stand alone as a sentence ✓
Second complete thought:- "her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
- Subject: her team
- Verb: identified
- This could also stand alone as a sentence ✓
- "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
- When we connect two complete thoughts with a connecting word like "and," we need a comma before the "and"
- This is the standard pattern: [complete thought], and [complete thought]
So we need a comma after "demographic" - before the word "and."
The correct answer is B: demographic,
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with "And"
When you want to combine two complete thoughts (each with its own subject and verb that could stand alone as a sentence) using a connecting word like "and," you need a comma before the "and." These connecting words are called coordinating conjunctions in grammar terms (and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet).
The pattern:
- [Complete thought], and [complete thought]
Examples:
- Two separate sentences:
- The study revealed surprising results. The researchers published their findings immediately.
- Combined with comma + and:
- The study revealed surprising results, and the researchers published their findings immediately.
- First complete thought: "The study revealed surprising results" (subject = study, verb = revealed)
- Second complete thought: "the researchers published their findings immediately" (subject = researchers, verb = published)
- Comma before "and" connects them properly
- The study revealed surprising results, and the researchers published their findings immediately.
In our question:
- First complete thought: "She discovered that engagement rates varied significantly by demographic"
- Second complete thought: "her team identified three key factors influencing purchase decisions"
- Proper connection: demographic, and her team...
Why the comma matters:
Without it, you create a run-on sentence - two complete thoughts improperly joined. The comma signals to the reader that one complete idea is ending and another is beginning, making the sentence structure clear and correct.
demographic
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a run-on sentence
- Two complete thoughts cannot be joined by just "and" alone - they need a comma before the coordinating conjunction
- Without the comma, this violates the rules for connecting independent clauses
demographic,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
demographic:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something that explains, lists, or elaborates on what came before
- "Her team identified three key factors" is not explaining what "engagement rates varied by demographic" means
- It's a separate, parallel action that happened - not a clarification or explanation
- The colon creates the wrong relationship between these two ideas
demographic;
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon is used to connect two complete thoughts WITHOUT a conjunction
- Here we already have the conjunction "and"
- When you have "and" (or another coordinating conjunction), you need a comma before it, not a semicolon
- The semicolon would work if we removed "and" (like: "...by demographic; her team identified..."), but that's not the structure we have