The Mesopotamian cylinder seals discovered at Uruk represent some of the earliest examples of narrative art in human history. Archaeologists...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Mesopotamian cylinder seals discovered at Uruk represent some of the earliest examples of narrative art in human history. Archaeologists have identified several distinctive carving _____ depict religious ceremonies as particularly significant because they provide insights into the spiritual practices of ancient Sumerian culture.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
styles. That
styles, that
styles and that
styles that
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The Mesopotamian cylinder seals discovered at Uruk
- represent some of the earliest examples
- of narrative art in human history.
- represent some of the earliest examples
- Archaeologists
- have identified several distinctive carving styles [?] depict religious ceremonies
- as particularly significant
- because they provide insights
- into the spiritual practices of ancient Sumerian culture.
- because they provide insights
- as particularly significant
- have identified several distinctive carving styles [?] depict religious ceremonies
- Where [?] represents:
- A: . That
- B: , that
- C: and that
- D: that
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us background information:
- 'The Mesopotamian cylinder seals discovered at Uruk'
- These are ancient artifacts from a place called Uruk
- 'represent some of the earliest examples of narrative art in human history'
- These seals are really significant - they're among the first art that told stories.
Now the second sentence:
- 'Archaeologists have identified several distinctive carving styles...'
- Okay, so researchers have found different styles of carvings on these seals.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: styles. That (makes two sentences)
- B: styles, that (adds a comma before "that")
- C: styles and that (adds "and" before "that")
- D: styles that (connects directly with "that")
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: 'depict religious ceremonies as particularly significant because they provide insights into the spiritual practices of ancient Sumerian culture.'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- 'that depict religious ceremonies'
- This is describing WHICH carving styles the archaeologists identified
- Not all carving styles - specifically the ones that show religious ceremonies
- 'as particularly significant'
- These specific styles are especially important
- 'because they provide insights into the spiritual practices...'
- Why are they important? Because they help us understand ancient religious practices
So the complete picture is:
- Archaeologists identified certain carving styles (specifically, the ones depicting religious ceremonies) and consider these styles particularly significant because of what they reveal about ancient beliefs.
What do we notice about the structure here?
- 'that depict religious ceremonies' is describing the noun 'styles'
- It's telling us WHICH styles are significant
- This is essential information - we need it to know which specific styles the sentence is about
- When a descriptive phrase tells us WHICH one (rather than just adding extra information), it should connect directly to the noun
- No comma, no period, no "and" - just direct connection
- The word 'that' creates this connection
So we need: styles that - with no punctuation or extra words.
The correct answer is D.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Nouns with Essential Descriptive Phrases
When you add a phrase that tells you WHICH specific thing you're talking about (called a restrictive or essential modifier in grammar terms), it should connect directly to the noun without punctuation:
Pattern 1: Essential information (tells you WHICH one) - No comma
- The students that studied received high scores
- "that studied" tells us WHICH students (not all students, only the ones who studied)
- Connects directly without punctuation
Pattern 2: Just extra detail (non-essential) - Use comma
- My sister, who lives in Boston, is visiting
- "who lives in Boston" is just bonus information (we already know which sister)
- Set off with commas
Pattern 3: When "that" introduces essential information - Never use a comma
- The carving styles that depict religious ceremonies are significant
- "that depict religious ceremonies" tells us WHICH styles
- Must connect directly: styles that depict
In this question:
- "several distinctive carving styles that depict religious ceremonies"
- We're identifying specific styles (the ones showing religious ceremonies)
- This is essential information - it narrows down which styles matter
- Therefore: connect directly with "that" and no punctuation
- Answer: D (styles that)
styles. That
(styles. That):
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a sentence fragment after the period
- "That depict religious ceremonies as particularly significant because they provide insights..." cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
- Starting with "That" this way leaves us wondering "that" what? There's no complete subject
- Violates the rule that each sentence must express a complete thought
styles, that
(styles, that):
✗ Incorrect
- Incorrectly places a comma before "that"
- When "that" introduces information telling us WHICH one (essential information), it should connect directly without a comma
- A comma here would signal the information is just extra detail (non-essential), but we actually need this phrase to identify which specific styles the sentence is about
- The comma disrupts the direct connection between the noun and its essential descriptor
styles and that
(styles and that):
✗ Incorrect
- Creates faulty structure by using "and"
- The word "and" suggests we're listing two separate things that archaeologists identified
- This would create: "identified [1] several distinctive carving styles and [2] that depict religious ceremonies"
- "That depict religious ceremonies" isn't something you can "identify" as a separate object - it's describing the styles, not standing as a parallel element
styles that
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.