The new central library in Portland was designed with floor-to-ceiling windows along its southern facade, _____ natural light throughout the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The new central library in Portland was designed with floor-to-ceiling windows along its southern facade, _____ natural light throughout the main reading spaces.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
it maximizes
maximizing
maximizes
this will maximize
Sentence Structure
- The new central library in Portland
- was designed
- with floor-to-ceiling windows
- along its southern facade,
- with floor-to-ceiling windows
- [?] natural light throughout the main reading spaces.
- was designed
Where [?] could be: it maximizes / maximizing / maximizes / this will maximize
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
- 'The new central library in Portland was designed with floor-to-ceiling windows along its southern facade'
- So we have a library in Portland
- It was designed with really tall windows (floor-to-ceiling) on the southern side of the building
This is where we have the blank – after a comma, followed by 'natural light throughout the main reading spaces.'
Let's look at the choices:
- They all involve some form of 'maximize'
- A and D add pronouns (it, this) and make complete verb forms (it maximizes, this will maximize)
- C is just the verb alone (maximizes)
- B is the -ing form (maximizing)
To see what works here, let's understand what the complete sentence is telling us!
The sentence is describing the library design:
- First part: The library was designed with these big windows on the southern side
- Second part (after the comma): something about maximizing natural light
What's the relationship between these two parts?
- The windows are the design feature
- Maximizing natural light is what those windows DO – it's the result or effect of having those windows
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We already have a complete thought: 'The new central library in Portland was designed with floor-to-ceiling windows along its southern facade'
- This could stand alone as a sentence
- It has a subject (library) and a main verb (was designed)
- After the comma, we need something that adds information WITHOUT creating a whole new sentence
- If we used 'it maximizes' or 'maximizes' or 'this will maximize,' we'd be starting a new complete thought
- But we only have a comma – and a comma alone can't connect two complete sentences
- The -ing form 'maximizing' works differently:
- It creates a describing phrase that tells us more about the windows
- It explains the effect or purpose of the design
- This is a common pattern: describe something, then add a comma and an -ing phrase to explain the result
So we need maximizing – it creates a descriptive phrase that explains what the windows accomplish, rather than starting a new sentence.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using -ing Phrases to Describe Results or Effects
When you want to describe the result, effect, or consequence of something you just mentioned, you can use a comma followed by an -ing phrase (called a participial phrase in grammar terms). This adds information without creating a new sentence:
Pattern: [Complete sentence], [verb-ing form] + [additional details about the result]
Example 1:
- Without the addition: "The architect installed solar panels on the roof"
- With -ing phrase: "The architect installed solar panels on the roof, reducing energy costs by 40%"
- Main action: installed solar panels
- Result described by -ing phrase: reducing energy costs
Example 2:
- Without the addition: "The restaurant opened a patio section"
- With -ing phrase: "The restaurant opened a patio section, allowing guests to dine outdoors"
- Main action: opened a patio section
- Result described by -ing phrase: allowing guests to dine outdoors
In our question:
- Main clause: "The new central library in Portland was designed with floor-to-ceiling windows along its southern facade"
- -ing phrase showing result: "maximizing natural light throughout the main reading spaces"
- The -ing phrase explains what the windows accomplish without creating a new sentence
it maximizes
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a complete sentence: "it maximizes natural light throughout the main reading spaces"
- Connecting two complete sentences with just a comma creates a comma splice error
- You'd need stronger punctuation (semicolon or period) or a comma with a connecting word like "and"
maximizing
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
maximizes
✗ Incorrect
- This also creates a complete sentence (the subject is understood/implied)
- Like Choice A, this results in a comma splice – two complete thoughts incorrectly joined by only a comma
this will maximize
✗ Incorrect
- This creates another complete sentence: "this will maximize natural light throughout the main reading spaces"
- Same comma splice problem as A and C – you can't connect two independent sentences with just a comma