The newly deployed space telescope captured detailed images of the distant ______ which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence of star...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The newly deployed space telescope captured detailed images of the distant ______ which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence of star formation in the early universe.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
galaxy
galaxy—
galaxy;
galaxy,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The newly deployed space telescope
- captured detailed images
- of the distant galaxy [?]
- which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence
- of star formation
- in the early universe.
- of star formation
- which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence
- of the distant galaxy [?]
- captured detailed images
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'The newly deployed space telescope captured detailed images of the distant galaxy'
- A new telescope was put into space
- It took detailed pictures of a galaxy far away
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We need to decide what punctuation (if any) should come after "galaxy"
- The options are: nothing, a dash, a semicolon, or a comma
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence of star formation in the early universe'
- Something "provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence"
- This evidence is about star formation in the early universe
- The key word here is "which"
Now let's understand what "which" is referring to:
- Could "which" refer to "the galaxy"?
- That would mean the galaxy itself provided evidence to astronomers
- But galaxies don't actively provide evidence - they just exist
- What if "which" refers to "the detailed images"?
- That would mean the images provided astronomers with evidence
- That makes perfect sense! The telescope captured images, and those images gave scientists important information
So the complete picture is:
- The telescope captured images of a distant galaxy
- Those images gave astronomers unprecedented evidence about star formation
What do we notice about the structure here?
The phrase starting with "which provided astronomers..." is giving us extra information about the images. It's adding a bonus detail - telling us what those images accomplished.
When we have a "which" phrase that adds this kind of supplementary information about something we just mentioned, we need a comma to introduce it. The comma signals: "Here's some additional information about what I just told you."
So we need: galaxy, (Choice D)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with "Which" Clauses That Add Extra Information
When you want to add supplementary information about something you just mentioned, you can use a clause starting with "which" (called a non-restrictive relative clause in grammar terms). These clauses must be introduced with a comma:
Pattern: [Main statement], which [additional information].
Example 1:
- Without extra info: "The researchers analyzed the fossil"
- With "which" clause: "The researchers analyzed the fossil, which dated back 65 million years"
- Main statement: The researchers analyzed the fossil
- Extra information: which dated back 65 million years
- The comma introduces the bonus detail
Example 2:
- Without extra info: "The team developed a new algorithm"
- With "which" clause: "The team developed a new algorithm, which improved processing speed by 40%"
- Main statement: The team developed a new algorithm
- Extra information: which improved processing speed by 40%
- The comma sets off the supplementary detail
In our question:
- Main statement: "The telescope captured detailed images of the distant galaxy"
- Extra information: "which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence..."
- The comma after "galaxy" correctly introduces this additional information about what the images accomplished
Key signal: When "which" starts a clause that adds bonus information (information you could remove and still have a complete sentence), you need a comma before "which."
galaxy
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a run-on structure by connecting the parts without any punctuation
- "Which" clauses that add extra information must be set off with a comma
- Without the comma, the sentence violates standard punctuation conventions
galaxy—
✗ Incorrect
- A dash creates a stronger, more dramatic break than what's needed here
- While dashes can introduce additional information, they're not the standard convention for "which" clauses
- The dash feels too abrupt for this smooth, flowing sentence
galaxy;
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon connects two complete thoughts that could stand alone as separate sentences
- "which provided astronomers with unprecedented evidence..." is NOT a complete thought - it's a dependent clause
- Using a semicolon here is grammatically incorrect because what follows cannot stand alone
galaxy,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.