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The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha _____ incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.

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The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha _____ incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

Graham,

B

Graham

C

Graham:

D

Graham—

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The performance,
  • choreographed by dancer Martha Graham [?]
  • incorporated innovative movements
  • that revolutionized modern dance.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

'The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha Graham...'

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A. Graham,
  • B. Graham (no punctuation)
  • C. Graham:
  • D. Graham—

So we're deciding what punctuation, if any, should come after "Graham."

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: '...incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.'

Now let's understand what we have:

  • 'The performance'
    • This is the main subject - what the sentence is about.
  • 'choreographed by dancer Martha Graham'
    • This is a descriptive phrase giving us extra information about the performance.
    • Notice it comes BETWEEN the subject and what comes next.
  • 'incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance'
    • This tells us what the performance did - "incorporated" is the main action.
    • The movements "revolutionized modern dance" - pretty significant!

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The phrase "choreographed by dancer Martha Graham" interrupts the natural flow from subject to verb.
    • The main structure is: "The performance incorporated movements"
    • But we've inserted descriptive information in the middle
  • When a descriptive phrase interrupts like this, we need to set it off with matching punctuation on BOTH sides.
    • We already have the opening comma after "performance"
    • So we need a closing comma after "Graham" to complete the pair

The correct answer is A (comma) - it pairs with the opening comma to properly set off the interruptive descriptive phrase.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Setting Off Interruptive Descriptive Phrases with Paired Commas

When you insert a descriptive phrase that interrupts the main flow of a sentence (called a parenthetical element in grammar terms), you need to set it off with matching punctuation on both sides - typically commas. This is especially important when the phrase comes between the subject and verb:

Pattern: [Subject], [descriptive phrase], [verb]...

Example 1:

  • Without interruption: The scientist discovered a new species.
  • With interruptive phrase: The scientist, working in the Amazon rainforest, discovered a new species.
    • Opening comma after "scientist"
    • Closing comma after "rainforest"

Example 2:

  • Without interruption: The report confirmed our suspicions.
  • With interruptive phrase: The report, released yesterday by the committee, confirmed our suspicions.
    • Opening comma after "report"
    • Closing comma after "committee"

In our question:

  • The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha Graham, incorporated innovative movements...
    • "choreographed by dancer Martha Graham" interrupts between subject and verb
    • Opening comma after "performance"
    • Closing comma needed after "Graham"

The key principle: What opens must close. If you start setting off a phrase with a comma, you must end it with a comma to signal the return to the main sentence structure.

Answer Choices Explained
A

Graham,

✓ Correct

This creates the proper paired punctuation needed to set off the interruptive descriptive phrase.

B

Graham

✗ Incorrect

  • This creates an error because the descriptive phrase opens with a comma after "performance" but never closes
  • When you open a descriptive phrase with a comma, you must close it with a comma
  • Without the closing comma, the sentence structure is incomplete and the flow is broken
C

Graham:

✗ Incorrect

  • A colon is used to introduce something that follows - a list, explanation, or elaboration
  • Here, "incorporated innovative movements" isn't explaining Graham - it's the main verb continuing the sentence about the performance
  • A colon doesn't match the opening comma and creates a structural mismatch
D

Graham—

✗ Incorrect

  • While a dash can set off information, punctuation marks need to match
  • The phrase opens with a comma, so it should close with a comma
  • Using mismatched punctuation (comma...dash) creates asymmetry and disrupts the sentence flow
  • Dashes also create a stronger break than is appropriate here
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