The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha _____ incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha _____ incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Graham,
Graham
Graham:
Graham—
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The performance,
- choreographed by dancer Martha Graham [?]
- incorporated innovative movements
- that revolutionized modern dance.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha Graham...'
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A. Graham,
- B. Graham (no punctuation)
- C. Graham:
- D. Graham—
So we're deciding what punctuation, if any, should come after "Graham."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: '...incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance.'
Now let's understand what we have:
- 'The performance'
- This is the main subject - what the sentence is about.
- 'choreographed by dancer Martha Graham'
- This is a descriptive phrase giving us extra information about the performance.
- Notice it comes BETWEEN the subject and what comes next.
- 'incorporated innovative movements that revolutionized modern dance'
- This tells us what the performance did - "incorporated" is the main action.
- The movements "revolutionized modern dance" - pretty significant!
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The phrase "choreographed by dancer Martha Graham" interrupts the natural flow from subject to verb.
- The main structure is: "The performance incorporated movements"
- But we've inserted descriptive information in the middle
- When a descriptive phrase interrupts like this, we need to set it off with matching punctuation on BOTH sides.
- We already have the opening comma after "performance"
- So we need a closing comma after "Graham" to complete the pair
The correct answer is A (comma) - it pairs with the opening comma to properly set off the interruptive descriptive phrase.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Setting Off Interruptive Descriptive Phrases with Paired Commas
When you insert a descriptive phrase that interrupts the main flow of a sentence (called a parenthetical element in grammar terms), you need to set it off with matching punctuation on both sides - typically commas. This is especially important when the phrase comes between the subject and verb:
Pattern: [Subject], [descriptive phrase], [verb]...
Example 1:
- Without interruption: The scientist discovered a new species.
- With interruptive phrase: The scientist, working in the Amazon rainforest, discovered a new species.
- Opening comma after "scientist"
- Closing comma after "rainforest"
Example 2:
- Without interruption: The report confirmed our suspicions.
- With interruptive phrase: The report, released yesterday by the committee, confirmed our suspicions.
- Opening comma after "report"
- Closing comma after "committee"
In our question:
- The performance, choreographed by dancer Martha Graham, incorporated innovative movements...
- "choreographed by dancer Martha Graham" interrupts between subject and verb
- Opening comma after "performance"
- Closing comma needed after "Graham"
The key principle: What opens must close. If you start setting off a phrase with a comma, you must end it with a comma to signal the return to the main sentence structure.
Graham,
✓ Correct
This creates the proper paired punctuation needed to set off the interruptive descriptive phrase.
Graham
✗ Incorrect
- This creates an error because the descriptive phrase opens with a comma after "performance" but never closes
- When you open a descriptive phrase with a comma, you must close it with a comma
- Without the closing comma, the sentence structure is incomplete and the flow is broken
Graham:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something that follows - a list, explanation, or elaboration
- Here, "incorporated innovative movements" isn't explaining Graham - it's the main verb continuing the sentence about the performance
- A colon doesn't match the opening comma and creates a structural mismatch
Graham—
✗ Incorrect
- While a dash can set off information, punctuation marks need to match
- The phrase opens with a comma, so it should close with a comma
- Using mismatched punctuation (comma...dash) creates asymmetry and disrupts the sentence flow
- Dashes also create a stronger break than is appropriate here