The Renaissance, a period of remarkable cultural rebirth spanning from the 14th to the 17th century in _____ marked a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Renaissance, a period of remarkable cultural rebirth spanning from the 14th to the 17th century in _____ marked a decisive break from medieval traditions and fostered unprecedented innovation in art and science.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Europe and
Europe,
Europe
Europe-
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The Renaissance,
- a period of remarkable cultural rebirth
- spanning from the 14th to the 17th century
- in Europe [?],
- marked a decisive break from medieval traditions
- and
- fostered unprecedented innovation in art and science.
Where [?] represents what we need to decide:
- Choice A: "and"
- Choice B: ","
- Choice C: nothing
- Choice D: "—"
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence starts with 'The Renaissance,'
- followed by 'a period of remarkable cultural rebirth spanning from the 14th to the 17th century in Europe...'
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- A adds "and"
- B adds a comma
- C adds nothing
- D adds an em dash
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
After the blank, the sentence continues:
- 'marked a decisive break from medieval traditions and fostered unprecedented innovation in art and science.'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- 'The Renaissance' is the subject of the sentence
- 'marked' and 'fostered' are the main actions
- The Renaissance did two things: it marked a break and it fostered innovation
- 'a period of remarkable cultural rebirth spanning from the 14th to the 17th century in Europe'
- This entire phrase is giving us extra descriptive information about what the Renaissance was
- It's positioned right after 'The Renaissance' and describes/renames it
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have: The Renaissance, [descriptive information about the Renaissance], marked...
- This descriptive phrase is inserted in the middle of the main sentence flow
- If we removed it, the core sentence would be: "The Renaissance marked a decisive break... and fostered innovation..."
- That works perfectly as a complete sentence!
- When you insert extra descriptive information in the middle of a sentence like this, you need to set it off with matching commas on BOTH sides
- We have the opening comma after 'The Renaissance,'
- So we need the closing comma after 'Europe' to complete the pair
So we need Choice B - the comma that closes off the descriptive phrase.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Comma Pairs to Set Off Descriptive Information
When you insert extra descriptive information about a noun in the middle of a sentence, you need to set it off with commas on BOTH sides (called a non-essential appositive or non-restrictive modifier in grammar terms). This creates a "comma pair" that shows the information is additional and could be removed without breaking the core sentence.
Pattern:
- Core sentence: The Renaissance marked a decisive break from medieval traditions
- With descriptive information inserted: The Renaissance, [a period of remarkable cultural rebirth spanning from the 14th to the 17th century in Europe], marked a decisive break from medieval traditions
- Opening comma after "The Renaissance"
- Closing comma after "Europe"
- The descriptive phrase can be lifted out, and the sentence still works perfectly
Test for comma pairs:
- Remove the information between the commas
- Does the remaining sentence still make grammatical sense?
- If yes, you need both commas to set off that descriptive information
In our question:
- Remove the phrase: "The Renaissance marked a decisive break from medieval traditions and fostered unprecedented innovation in art and science."
- Perfect! This confirms we need the comma pair.
Europe and
✗ Incorrect
- The word "and" suggests we're connecting two equal items in a list or joining two separate ideas
- But "a period of remarkable cultural rebirth..." is a descriptive phrase that gives information about "The Renaissance," not something being connected to it as a separate item
- Using "and" breaks the comma pair that should set off the descriptive phrase and creates a grammatical error
Europe,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
Europe
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, we fail to close the descriptive phrase that was opened with the comma after "The Renaissance"
- This makes the sentence structure unclear - it's hard to tell where the description ends and where the main sentence action begins
- The sentence becomes grammatically incomplete because we've opened with a comma but never closed the interrupting phrase
Europe-
✗ Incorrect
- An em dash can be used to set off extra information, but you need MATCHING punctuation on both sides
- We opened with a comma after "The Renaissance," so we must close with a comma, not an em dash
- Mixing punctuation marks (comma...dash) is grammatically incorrect