The research team identified three critical factors affecting crop _____ soil nutrient levels, water availability, and pest management practices.
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The research team identified three critical factors affecting crop _____ soil nutrient levels, water availability, and pest management practices.
Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?
yields:
yields of
yields—
yields of,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The research team identified three critical factors
- affecting crop yields[?]
- soil nutrient levels,
- water availability, and
- pest management practices.
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts by telling us what a research team did:
- 'The research team identified three critical factors'
- They found three important factors
Then we learn what these factors relate to:
- 'affecting crop yields'
- These factors have an impact on how much crops produce
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A adds a colon (:)
- B adds the word "of"
- C adds an em dash (—)
- D adds "of" followed by a comma
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues with:
- 'soil nutrient levels, water availability, and pest management practices'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- This is a list of three things:
- soil nutrient levels
- water availability
- pest management practices
- These three items ARE the "three critical factors" mentioned earlier
- The sentence first announces "we found three factors"
- Then it tells us what those three factors are
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The first part is a complete thought:
- "The research team identified three critical factors affecting crop yields"
- This could stand alone as a sentence
- It announces that a list is coming ("three critical factors")
- The second part gives us the actual list
- The specific three factors that were just announced
- We need punctuation that introduces a list after a complete statement that announces it
So we need a colon (:). The colon is the standard punctuation mark for introducing a list when what comes before is a complete sentence that sets up the list.
The correct answer is A: yields:
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Colons to Introduce Lists
When you have a complete sentence that announces or introduces a list, you use a colon before the list begins. The key is that what comes before the colon must be able to stand alone as a complete thought:
Pattern:
- Complete announcement + colon + list of items
Example 1:
- The committee identified three priorities: budget reform, staff training, and community outreach.
- Before colon: "The committee identified three priorities" (complete thought)
- After colon: the three priorities listed
Example 2:
- She needed several supplies for the project: paint, brushes, canvas, and an easel.
- Before colon: "She needed several supplies for the project" (complete thought)
- After colon: the specific supplies listed
In our question:
- "The research team identified three critical factors affecting crop yields" (complete thought announcing the list)
- Colon
- "soil nutrient levels, water availability, and pest management practices" (the three factors)
The colon signals to the reader: "Here comes the specific information I just announced."
yields:
Correct as explained in the solution above.
yields of
- This would create "factors affecting crop yields of soil nutrient levels..."
- This meaning doesn't work - we're not talking about "yields of soil nutrient levels"
- The factors affect the yields; they aren't yields "of" something
- Creates a grammatically nonsensical phrase
yields—
- An em dash can add information or create a dramatic break
- However, it's not the standard punctuation for formally introducing an announced list
- Em dashes are better for interruptions, afterthoughts, or dramatic additions
- When you've specifically announced "three factors" and are about to list them, a colon is the proper choice
yields of,
- Has the same meaning problem as Choice B (nonsensical "yields of soil nutrient levels")
- Adds an incorrect comma on top of the meaning issue
- Creates grammatical confusion