The Riverside Museum was conceived during an era of architectural innovation. Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in _____ by...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The Riverside Museum was conceived during an era of architectural innovation. Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in _____ by the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example of Art Deco architecture.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
1927
1927,
1927:
1927;
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The Riverside Museum
- was conceived
- during an era of architectural innovation.
- was conceived
- Thomas Hartwell
- designed the distinctive structure
- in 1927[?]
- designed the distinctive structure
- by the following decade,
- it
- had become the city's most celebrated example of Art Deco architecture.
- it
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The first sentence gives us background:
- 'The Riverside Museum was conceived during an era of architectural innovation'
- This museum was planned during a time when architects were doing innovative things.
Now the passage tells us about the architect:
- 'Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927'
- We learn who designed it (Hartwell) and when (1927).
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding what punctuation (if any) should come after 1927.
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- 'by the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example of Art Deco architecture'
- By the 1930s (the decade after 1927), this building had become the most famous Art Deco building in the city.
Now let's understand what we have structurally:
Before the blank:
- 'Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927'
- Subject: Thomas Hartwell
- Action: designed
- What: the distinctive structure
- When: in 1927
- This is a complete thought that could stand alone as its own sentence.
After the blank:
- 'by the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example of Art Deco architecture'
- When: by the following decade
- Subject: it (the structure)
- Action: had become
- What it became: the most celebrated example
- This is also a complete thought that could stand alone as its own sentence.
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two complete sentences that are closely related in meaning:
- First: Hartwell designed it in 1927
- Second: By the next decade, it became famous
- These are separate complete thoughts, but they're telling one connected story about the building's history.
So we need a semicolon. A semicolon is specifically designed to connect two complete sentences that are closely related - it shows they belong together while respecting that each is grammatically independent.
The correct answer is D (1927;).
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Sentences with a Semicolon
When you have two complete sentences (called independent clauses in grammar terms) that are closely related in meaning, you have several correct options:
Option 1 - Separate as two sentences:
- Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927. By the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example.
Option 2 - Connect with a semicolon:
- Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927; by the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example.
- The semicolon shows these thoughts are connected while respecting that each is a complete sentence
Option 3 - Connect with comma + coordinating conjunction:
- Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927, and by the following decade, it had become the city's most celebrated example.
- Coordinating conjunctions: and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet
What you CANNOT do:
Join with just a comma (comma splice):
- Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927, by the following decade...
Run them together with no punctuation (run-on sentence):
- Thomas Hartwell designed the distinctive structure in 1927 by the following decade...
In this question: Both parts before and after the blank are complete sentences that are closely related (both about the museum's history), making the semicolon the perfect choice to connect them.
1927
- This creates a run-on sentence - two complete sentences run together without any punctuation
- You cannot join two complete sentences without proper punctuation between them
- The result would be grammatically incorrect
1927,
- This creates a comma splice - using just a comma to join two complete sentences
- A comma alone is not strong enough punctuation to connect two independent sentences
- This is one of the most common punctuation errors
1927:
- A colon is used to introduce something that explains, elaborates on, or lists what came before
- The second sentence here doesn't explain the 1927 design - it tells us what happened later in the 1930s
- The relationship between these clauses is sequential (one thing happened, then another), not explanatory
- A colon doesn't fit this relationship
1927;
Correct as explained in the solution above.