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GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The symphony orchestra prepared an ambitious season featuring rarely performed contemporary compositions, hoping to attract younger audiences to classical music. The artistic director had intended to include several world premieres in the spring _____ ultimately selected more familiar works to ensure ticket sales.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
program but
program, but
program,
program
Sentence Structure
- The symphony orchestra prepared an ambitious season
featuring rarely performed contemporary compositions,
hopping to attract younger audiences to classical music.
- The artistic director had intended to include several world premieres
in the spring program [?]
ultimately selected more familiar works
to ensure ticket sales.
Where [?] represents what varies in the choices:
- A: program but (no comma)
- B: program, but (comma before but)
- C: program, (just comma)
- D: program (nothing)
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start with the first sentence to understand the context:
'The symphony orchestra prepared an ambitious season featuring rarely performed contemporary compositions, hoping to attract younger audiences to classical music.'
- This tells us the orchestra is trying something adventurous –
- playing rarely performed modern pieces
- with the goal of attracting younger people to classical music.
Now the second sentence:
'The artistic director had intended to include several world premieres in the spring program...'
- The director had a plan –
- to include several world premieres (brand new pieces never performed before)
- in the spring program
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding whether we need "but" and whether we need a comma
- Let's read what comes after to understand the complete relationship
The sentence continues: 'ultimately selected more familiar works to ensure ticket sales.'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- 'Had intended to include several world premieres'
- This is what the director planned to do
- 'Ultimately selected more familiar works'
- This is what the director actually did instead
- 'Ultimately' signals the final decision
- 'Familiar works' contrasts with 'world premieres'
So the complete picture is:
- The director intended one thing but did something else –
a clear contrast between the plan and the reality
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have one subject doing two different actions:
- Subject: "The artistic director"
- Action 1: "had intended to include several world premieres"
- Action 2: "ultimately selected more familiar works"
- These two actions are contrasting – the director changed course
- So we need "but" to show this contrast
- But here's the key: both actions belong to the same subject
- The artistic director is the one who intended AND the one who selected
- We don't have two separate complete thoughts
- We have one person doing two things
When one subject performs two actions connected by a word like "but," we don't use a comma – we just use the connecting word.
So we need: program but
The correct answer is A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Actions by the Same Subject: Compound Predicates
When one subject performs two actions connected by words like "and," "or," or "but," you have what's called a compound predicate in grammar terms. The rule is simple: use the connecting word without a comma.
Pattern:
- Subject + Verb 1 + but + Verb 2
- Example: "The chef prepared the ingredients but forgot to preheat the oven"
- "The chef" does both actions (prepared AND forgot)
- Connected with "but" but NO comma
Compare this to two complete separate thoughts (compound sentence):
- Subject 1 + Verb 1, but + Subject 2 + Verb 2
- Example: "The chef prepared the ingredients, but the assistant forgot to preheat the oven"
- Two different subjects (chef and assistant)
- Connected with comma + "but"
How this applies to our question:
- "The artistic director had intended to include several world premieres in the spring program but ultimately selected more familiar works"
- One subject: "The artistic director"
- Two actions: "had intended" and "selected"
- These contrast with each other, so we need "but"
- Because it's one subject doing both actions, we use "but" without a comma
The key is identifying whether you have one subject doing multiple things (no comma) or multiple complete thoughts (comma needed).
program but
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
program, but
✗ Incorrect
- This adds a comma before "but," which would be needed if we had two completely separate statements, each with its own subject
- For example: "The director had intended to include premieres, but the board ultimately selected familiar works" (two different subjects)
- But here we have one subject (the artistic director) doing two things, so the comma is incorrect
program,
✗ Incorrect
- This uses only a comma without "but"
- A comma alone can't connect these two parts because we need to show the contrast between what was intended and what actually happened
- Without "but," the relationship between the two actions isn't clear
- This creates a comma splice error
program
✗ Incorrect
- This uses nothing – no comma, no "but"
- This creates confusion because "ultimately selected" seems to run directly on from the previous phrase
- We need "but" to signal the contrast and shift from intention to reality
- Without any punctuation or conjunction, this becomes a run-on structure