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The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app _____ the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A
(2017), and
B
(2017) and
C
(2017),
D
(2017)
Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The tech startup DataFlow
  • revolutionized mobile payment systems
    • with its innovative encryption app
      • (2017)[?, and]
  • the company quickly expanded operations
    • to over fifty countries
      • across six continents.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The sentence tells us about a tech startup called DataFlow:

  • It revolutionized mobile payment systems
  • How? With its innovative encryption app
  • When? In 2017

This is where we have the blank: after "(2017)"

Let's look at the choices:

  • They're asking us to decide between:
    • (2017), and
    • (2017) and
    • (2017),
    • (2017) [nothing]

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents."

So this part tells us:

  • The company (DataFlow) expanded operations
  • Where? To over fifty countries across six continents

Now let's look at what we have overall:

FIRST PART: "The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app (2017)"

  • This is a complete thought with:
    • Subject: The tech startup DataFlow
    • Action: revolutionized
    • What: mobile payment systems

SECOND PART: "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents"

  • This is also a complete thought with:
    • Subject: the company
    • Action: expanded
    • What: operations

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as sentences
  • But they're closely related - both are about DataFlow's success
  • The second follows from the first chronologically

When we want to connect two complete thoughts with "and," we need a comma before the "and."

So we need: (2017), and

The correct answer is Choice A.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with a Comma and Coordinating Conjunction

When you have two complete thoughts (sentences that could stand alone, called independent clauses in grammar terms) and you want to connect them with a coordinating conjunction like "and," you must place a comma before that conjunction.

The pattern looks like this:

Complete Thought 1, and Complete Thought 2.

Examples:

  • Example 1: The scientist conducted the experiment, and she published her findings.
    • Complete Thought 1: "The scientist conducted the experiment"
    • Comma + "and"
    • Complete Thought 2: "she published her findings"
  • Example 2: The team scored three goals, but they still lost the match.
    • Complete Thought 1: "The team scored three goals"
    • Comma + "but"
    • Complete Thought 2: "they still lost the match"

In our question:

  • Complete Thought 1: "The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app (2017)"
  • Needs: Comma + "and"
  • Complete Thought 2: "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents"

Common coordinating conjunctions to remember: and, but, or, nor, for, yet, so

Important: Both thoughts must be complete (have their own subject and verb) to use this pattern. If one part can't stand alone as a sentence, you typically don't need the comma before "and."

Answer Choices Explained
A
(2017), and
B
(2017) and
  • ✗ Incorrect
    • Uses "and" to connect the two complete thoughts, but is missing the comma
    • When connecting two complete thoughts with "and," you must include a comma before the "and"
    • Without the comma, this violates the standard punctuation rule
  • C
    (2017),
  • ✗ Incorrect
    • Uses only a comma to connect two complete thoughts
    • A comma by itself is not strong enough to connect two complete thoughts - this creates what's called a comma splice
    • You need either a comma + "and" (or another connecting word), or stronger punctuation like a semicolon
  • D
    (2017)
  • ✗ Incorrect
    • Uses no punctuation at all to connect two complete thoughts
    • This creates a run-on sentence where two complete thoughts crash into each other with nothing between them
    • This is the most serious punctuation error of all the choices
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