The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app _____ the company quickly expanded operations to...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app _____ the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The tech startup DataFlow
- revolutionized mobile payment systems
- with its innovative encryption app
- (2017)[?, and]
- with its innovative encryption app
- the company quickly expanded operations
- to over fifty countries
- across six continents.
- to over fifty countries
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence tells us about a tech startup called DataFlow:
- It revolutionized mobile payment systems
- How? With its innovative encryption app
- When? In 2017
This is where we have the blank: after "(2017)"
Let's look at the choices:
- They're asking us to decide between:
- (2017), and
- (2017) and
- (2017),
- (2017) [nothing]
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents."
So this part tells us:
- The company (DataFlow) expanded operations
- Where? To over fifty countries across six continents
Now let's look at what we have overall:
FIRST PART: "The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app (2017)"
- This is a complete thought with:
- Subject: The tech startup DataFlow
- Action: revolutionized
- What: mobile payment systems
SECOND PART: "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents"
- This is also a complete thought with:
- Subject: the company
- Action: expanded
- What: operations
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as sentences
- But they're closely related - both are about DataFlow's success
- The second follows from the first chronologically
When we want to connect two complete thoughts with "and," we need a comma before the "and."
So we need: (2017), and
The correct answer is Choice A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with a Comma and Coordinating Conjunction
When you have two complete thoughts (sentences that could stand alone, called independent clauses in grammar terms) and you want to connect them with a coordinating conjunction like "and," you must place a comma before that conjunction.
The pattern looks like this:
Complete Thought 1, and Complete Thought 2.
Examples:
- Example 1: The scientist conducted the experiment, and she published her findings.
- Complete Thought 1: "The scientist conducted the experiment"
- Comma + "and"
- Complete Thought 2: "she published her findings"
- Example 2: The team scored three goals, but they still lost the match.
- Complete Thought 1: "The team scored three goals"
- Comma + "but"
- Complete Thought 2: "they still lost the match"
In our question:
- Complete Thought 1: "The tech startup DataFlow revolutionized mobile payment systems with its innovative encryption app (2017)"
- Needs: Comma + "and"
- Complete Thought 2: "the company quickly expanded operations to over fifty countries across six continents"
Common coordinating conjunctions to remember: and, but, or, nor, for, yet, so
Important: Both thoughts must be complete (have their own subject and verb) to use this pattern. If one part can't stand alone as a sentence, you typically don't need the comma before "and."
- Uses "and" to connect the two complete thoughts, but is missing the comma
- When connecting two complete thoughts with "and," you must include a comma before the "and"
- Without the comma, this violates the standard punctuation rule
- Uses only a comma to connect two complete thoughts
- A comma by itself is not strong enough to connect two complete thoughts - this creates what's called a comma splice
- You need either a comma + "and" (or another connecting word), or stronger punctuation like a semicolon
- Uses no punctuation at all to connect two complete thoughts
- This creates a run-on sentence where two complete thoughts crash into each other with nothing between them
- This is the most serious punctuation error of all the choices