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The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding. The company opened its first international headquarters in _____ establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

Singapore and

B

Singapore,

C

Singapore, and

D

Singapore

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding.
  • The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore (?)
    • establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading:

The first sentence gives us background:

  • 'The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding.'
    • A tech company got funding and grew quickly.

Now the second sentence tells us about a specific thing the company did:

  • 'The company opened its first international headquarters in _____'

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A: Singapore and
  • B: Singapore,
  • C: Singapore, and
  • D: Singapore

They differ in whether we have a comma and whether we have "and." To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • 'establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.'

Now let's understand what this part is doing:

  • 'Establishing a workforce...' is giving us additional information about what happened when they opened the headquarters.
    • It's describing something that occurred as part of or alongside the opening.
    • It's not stating a separate, independent action – it's adding descriptive detail to the main action (opening the headquarters).

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have a complete statement:
    • "The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore"
  • Followed by added descriptive information:
    • "establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees..."
  • This second part is not a complete thought that could stand alone
    • It's additional information that describes/expands on the main action
  • When we add this type of descriptive information after a complete statement, we use a comma to separate it
    • We don't use "and" because we're not connecting two complete thoughts
    • We're just adding descriptive detail

So we need: Singapore, (Choice B)


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Descriptive Phrases That Add Information

When you have a main statement followed by a phrase that adds descriptive or supplementary information (called a participial phrase in grammar terms – a phrase starting with an -ing verb form), you need to separate them with a comma:

Pattern:

  • Main complete statement + comma + descriptive phrase adding information

Example 1:

  • The restaurant received excellent reviews, attracting customers from across the city.
    • Main statement: "The restaurant received excellent reviews"
    • Descriptive addition: "attracting customers from across the city"
    • The comma separates the main idea from the additional descriptive detail

Example 2:

  • She finished the project ahead of schedule, earning praise from her supervisor.
    • Main statement: "She finished the project ahead of schedule"
    • Descriptive addition: "earning praise from her supervisor"

In our question:

  • Main statement: "The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore"
  • Descriptive addition: "establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year"
  • Comma needed to properly separate these elements

Key point: Don't use "and" in this situation – "and" is for connecting two complete thoughts of equal weight, not for adding descriptive information to a main statement.

Answer Choices Explained
A

Singapore and

✗ Incorrect

  • Uses "and" without a comma
  • "And" is used to connect two parallel elements of equal weight
  • But "establishing a workforce..." is not a complete thought that can be connected with "and" – it's descriptive information, not a coordinate clause
  • This creates an awkward, grammatically incorrect structure
B

Singapore,

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
C

Singapore, and

✗ Incorrect

  • Uses both a comma and "and"
  • The "and" signals that we're connecting two independent, complete thoughts
  • But "establishing a workforce..." is not an independent clause – it's descriptive information
  • The "and" is inappropriate here because we're not coordinating two equal clauses
D

Singapore

✗ Incorrect

  • No punctuation at all
  • Runs the main statement directly into the descriptive phrase without separation
  • Lacks the comma needed to properly set off the additional descriptive information
  • Creates a run-on feel and reduces clarity
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