The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding. The company opened its first international headquarters in _____ estab...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding. The company opened its first international headquarters in _____ establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Singapore and
Singapore,
Singapore, and
Singapore
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding.
- The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore (?)
- establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading:
The first sentence gives us background:
- 'The technology startup expanded rapidly after securing venture capital funding.'
- A tech company got funding and grew quickly.
Now the second sentence tells us about a specific thing the company did:
- 'The company opened its first international headquarters in _____'
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: Singapore and
- B: Singapore,
- C: Singapore, and
- D: Singapore
They differ in whether we have a comma and whether we have "and." To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year.'
Now let's understand what this part is doing:
- 'Establishing a workforce...' is giving us additional information about what happened when they opened the headquarters.
- It's describing something that occurred as part of or alongside the opening.
- It's not stating a separate, independent action – it's adding descriptive detail to the main action (opening the headquarters).
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have a complete statement:
- "The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore"
- Followed by added descriptive information:
- "establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees..."
- This second part is not a complete thought that could stand alone
- It's additional information that describes/expands on the main action
- When we add this type of descriptive information after a complete statement, we use a comma to separate it
- We don't use "and" because we're not connecting two complete thoughts
- We're just adding descriptive detail
So we need: Singapore, (Choice B)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Descriptive Phrases That Add Information
When you have a main statement followed by a phrase that adds descriptive or supplementary information (called a participial phrase in grammar terms – a phrase starting with an -ing verb form), you need to separate them with a comma:
Pattern:
- Main complete statement + comma + descriptive phrase adding information
Example 1:
- The restaurant received excellent reviews, attracting customers from across the city.
- Main statement: "The restaurant received excellent reviews"
- Descriptive addition: "attracting customers from across the city"
- The comma separates the main idea from the additional descriptive detail
Example 2:
- She finished the project ahead of schedule, earning praise from her supervisor.
- Main statement: "She finished the project ahead of schedule"
- Descriptive addition: "earning praise from her supervisor"
In our question:
- Main statement: "The company opened its first international headquarters in Singapore"
- Descriptive addition: "establishing a workforce of over two hundred employees within the first year"
- Comma needed to properly separate these elements
Key point: Don't use "and" in this situation – "and" is for connecting two complete thoughts of equal weight, not for adding descriptive information to a main statement.
Singapore and
✗ Incorrect
- Uses "and" without a comma
- "And" is used to connect two parallel elements of equal weight
- But "establishing a workforce..." is not a complete thought that can be connected with "and" – it's descriptive information, not a coordinate clause
- This creates an awkward, grammatically incorrect structure
Singapore,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
Singapore, and
✗ Incorrect
- Uses both a comma and "and"
- The "and" signals that we're connecting two independent, complete thoughts
- But "establishing a workforce..." is not an independent clause – it's descriptive information
- The "and" is inappropriate here because we're not coordinating two equal clauses
Singapore
✗ Incorrect
- No punctuation at all
- Runs the main statement directly into the descriptive phrase without separation
- Lacks the comma needed to properly set off the additional descriptive information
- Creates a run-on feel and reduces clarity