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To humans, it does not appear that the golden orb-weaver spider uses camouflage to capture its ________ the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously in the center of its large circular web for insects to approach. Researcher Po Peng of the University of Melbourne has explained that the spider's distinctive coloration may in fact be part of its appeal.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

prey, rather,

B

prey rather,

C

prey, rather;

D

prey; rather,

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • To humans,
    • it does not appear
      • that the golden orb-weaver spider uses camouflage
        • to capture its prey[?]rather,
          • the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously
            • in the center of its large circular web
            • for insects to approach.
  • Researcher Po Peng of the University of Melbourne has explained
    • that the spider's distinctive coloration may in fact be part of its appeal.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading and understanding what this passage is telling us.

'To humans, it does not appear that the golden orb-weaver spider uses camouflage to capture its prey'

  • This is saying: To humans, it doesn't look like the spider uses camouflage to catch its food.

This is where we have the blank.

Let's look at the choices:

  • Choice A: prey, rather,
  • Choice B: prey rather,
  • Choice C: prey, rather;
  • Choice D: prey; rather,

So we're deciding what punctuation to use around the word "rather."

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

'rather, the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously in the center of its large circular web for insects to approach.'

  • "Rather" signals a contrast - it's introducing an alternative view
  • "the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously..."
    • The spider (arachnid) appears to wait in an obvious, noticeable way
    • in the center of its large circular web
    • for insects to approach

So the complete picture is:

  • To humans, it doesn't look like the spider uses camouflage
  • Rather (instead), the spider seems to sit right out in the open waiting for prey

What do we notice about the structure here?

Let's look at the two parts that "rather" is connecting:

  • FIRST part: "it does not appear that the golden orb-weaver spider uses camouflage to capture its prey"
    • This is a complete thought - it has a subject ("it") and verb ("does not appear") and expresses a full idea
    • It could stand alone as its own sentence
  • SECOND part: "the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously in the center of its large circular web for insects to approach"
    • This is also a complete thought - it has a subject ("the brightly colored arachnid") and verb ("seems")
    • It could also stand alone as its own sentence
  • "Rather" is a transitional word showing the contrast between these two complete thoughts

Here's the key relationship:

  • When you have two complete thoughts connected by a transitional word like "rather," you can't just use a comma between them
  • You need a semicolon BEFORE the transitional word to properly separate the two complete thoughts
  • Then you use a comma AFTER the transitional word

The pattern is: [complete thought]; [transitional word], [complete thought]

So we need: prey; rather, (Choice D)

GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with Transitional Words

When you want to connect two complete thoughts (called independent clauses in grammar terms) using a transitional word like "rather," "however," "therefore," "moreover," etc., you need to follow this punctuation pattern:

Pattern: [Complete thought]; [transitional word], [complete thought]

Example 1:

  • The experiment failed; however, the scientists learned valuable information.
  • "The experiment failed" = complete thought
  • "however" = transitional word showing contrast
  • "the scientists learned valuable information" = complete thought

Example 2:

  • She studied medicine; instead, her brother pursued engineering.
  • "She studied medicine" = complete thought
  • "instead" = transitional word showing alternative
  • "her brother pursued engineering" = complete thought

In our question:

  • "it does not appear that the spider uses camouflage to capture its prey" = complete thought
  • "rather" = transitional word showing contrast
  • "the brightly colored arachnid seems to wait conspicuously..." = complete thought
  • Correct punctuation: prey; rather,

Why this matters: Transitional words are NOT the same as coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, nor, for, yet, so). Coordinating conjunctions can connect two complete thoughts with just a comma, but transitional words require a semicolon before them and a comma after them.

Answer Choices Explained
A

prey, rather,

✗ Incorrect

  • Uses only a comma before "rather" to connect two complete thoughts
  • This creates a comma splice - a comma alone cannot properly join two complete thoughts
  • Two complete thoughts need stronger separation (like a semicolon or period)
B

prey rather,

✗ Incorrect

  • Has no punctuation at all between the two complete thoughts
  • This creates a run-on sentence where two complete thoughts run together
  • Without proper punctuation, the sentence becomes grammatically incorrect
C

prey, rather;

✗ Incorrect

  • Places the semicolon in the wrong position - after "rather" instead of before it
  • Still uses a comma before "rather," which creates a comma splice
  • The semicolon should come BEFORE the transitional word to separate the two complete thoughts
D

prey; rather,

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

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