When a given industry-water and electricity are two well-known examples-carries high infrastructural start-up costs and other barriers that discourage...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
When a given industry-water and electricity are two well-known examples-carries high infrastructural start-up costs and other barriers that discourage competition, ________ of just one or two suppliers per municipality. Such industries are known as natural monopolies.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
these often consist
they often consist
it often consists
this often consists
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- When a given industry—
- water and electricity are two well-known examples—
- carries high infrastructural start-up costs and other barriers
- that discourage competition,
- ______ [?] of just one or two suppliers per municipality.
- Such industries are known as natural monopolies.
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts with a condition:
- 'When a given industry'
- We're talking about one industry at a time
- Note: "a given industry" is SINGULAR - one industry
- Then we get examples in dashes:
- '—water and electricity are two well-known examples—'
- These are just examples of industries that fit this pattern
- They're extra information, not the main subject
- The sentence continues:
- 'carries high infrastructural start-up costs and other barriers that discourage competition'
- This describes industries that are very expensive to start up
- The high costs create barriers that prevent competition
Now here's where we need to fill in the blank:
- '______ of just one or two suppliers per municipality.'
Let's look at our choices:
- We need to decide what pronoun or word to use
- The choices are: these, they, it, or this
- We also need to match it with the right verb form: consist or consists
What does this blank need to refer back to?
- It needs to refer to "a given industry" - that's what this whole sentence is about
- "A given industry" is SINGULAR (we're talking about one industry)
So we need:
- A singular pronoun to match "a given industry"
- That's "it" (singular)
- And the verb must be singular too: "consists"
- The correct answer is C: it often consists
Now let's read the rest to see the complete picture:
- The complete sentence tells us:
- When an industry has high start-up costs and barriers to competition,
- that industry (it) often consists of just one or two suppliers per municipality
- The next sentence confirms this idea:
- "Such industries are known as natural monopolies."
- These are industries where it's natural to have only one or a few suppliers because competition doesn't make sense
Grammar Concept Applied
Matching Pronouns to Their Antecedents
When you use a pronoun, it must agree in number with its antecedent (called the antecedent in grammar terms) - the noun it refers back to:
Pattern 1: Singular antecedent → Singular pronoun
- Original: "When a student studies hard..."
- Pronoun reference: "...he or she often succeeds." OR "...they often succeed." (singular they)
- In our question: "a given industry" (singular) → "it" (singular)
Pattern 2: Plural antecedent → Plural pronoun
- Original: "When students study hard..."
- Pronoun reference: "...they often succeed."
- If our question said "given industries" → we'd use "they"
The challenge in this question:
- The antecedent "a given industry" is separated from the pronoun by a long dependent clause
- The dashes contain plural words "water and electricity," which might distract you
- But those are just examples - they're not the subject
- Always trace back to find the true antecedent: "a given industry" (singular)
- Therefore: "it" (singular) with "consists" (singular verb)
Key strategy: When you see a pronoun blank, look backward to find what noun it's referring to, then make sure they match in number (singular or plural).
these often consist
✗ Incorrect
- "These" is plural, but the antecedent is "a given industry," which is singular
- This creates a pronoun-antecedent disagreement
- We'd need a plural noun like "industries" for "these" to work
they often consist
✗ Incorrect
- "They" is plural, but "a given industry" is singular
- Students might be distracted by "water and electricity" in the dashes, but those are just examples, not the subject
- Creates a pronoun-antecedent disagreement
it often consists
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
this often consists
✗ Incorrect
- While "this" is singular in number, it's typically used to refer to ideas, situations, or concepts mentioned previously
- "It" is the more natural and standard pronoun choice for referring back to a specific countable noun like "industry"
- "This" sounds awkward and imprecise in this context