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When astronomers first detected the planet WASP-12b through their telescopes, they noted its extraordinary size and proximity to its star. Further spectroscopic analysis confirmed the planet to be a gas giant, _____ atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius by the intense radiation from its host star.

Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?

A

giant; its

B

giant, and its

C

giant, its

D

giant. Its

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Sentence 1:
    • When astronomers first detected the planet WASP-12b through their telescopes,
    • they noted
      • its extraordinary size and proximity to its star.
  • Sentence 2:
    • Further spectroscopic analysis confirmed
      • the planet to be a gas giant [?]
        • atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius
          • by the intense radiation from its host star.

Understanding the Meaning

The first sentence sets up the context:

  • Astronomers detected a planet called WASP-12b through telescopes
  • They noticed it was extraordinarily large and very close to its star

Now the second sentence tells us what further analysis revealed:

  • Further spectroscopic analysis confirmed the planet to be a gas giant
    • This is telling us what kind of planet it is - a gas giant

This is where we have the blank.

Let's look at the choices:

  • Choice A: semicolon + its (lowercase)
  • Choice B: comma + and + its (lowercase)
  • Choice C: comma + its (lowercase)
  • Choice D: period + Its (capitalized)

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: 'its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius by the intense radiation from its host star.'

Now let's really understand what this is telling us:

  • Its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius
    • This describes a specific characteristic of the gas giant
    • The planet's atmosphere has been inflated (puffed up) to nearly twice the size of Jupiter's radius
  • By the intense radiation from its host star
    • This explains WHY the atmosphere is so inflated
    • The star's radiation is heating and expanding the atmosphere

So the complete picture is:

  • Scientists confirmed this is a gas giant with an atmosphere that's been inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius because of intense radiation from its nearby star

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • Further spectroscopic analysis confirmed the planet to be a gas giant
    • This is a complete thought that could stand alone as a sentence
  • Its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius...
    • This is NOT a complete sentence
    • It's a noun ('its atmosphere') with a descriptive phrase ('inflated to...')
    • This phrase is providing extra descriptive information about the gas giant
    • Notice that 'inflated' here is describing the atmosphere, not acting as the main action verb of a new sentence

When we have a descriptive phrase like this that adds extra information about something in the main sentence, we connect it with a comma.

So we need: Choice C (giant, its)




GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas to Connect Descriptive Phrases (Noun + Modifier)

When you have a descriptive phrase that provides additional information about something in your main sentence, you connect it with a comma. This often happens when you have a noun followed by a descriptive form (called a participial phrase or absolute phrase in grammar terms):

Pattern:

  • Complete sentence + comma + noun + descriptive phrase

Example 1:

  • Main sentence: "The team celebrated their victory"
  • Added description: "their coach beaming with pride"
  • Combined: "The team celebrated their victory, their coach beaming with pride."
  • "Their coach" = noun
  • "Beaming with pride" = descriptive phrase

Example 2:

  • Main sentence: "The storm passed through the valley"
  • Added description: "its winds reaching speeds of 100 mph"
  • Combined: "The storm passed through the valley, its winds reaching speeds of 100 mph."
  • "Its winds" = noun
  • "Reaching speeds of 100 mph" = descriptive phrase

In our question:

  • Main sentence: "Further spectroscopic analysis confirmed the planet to be a gas giant"
  • Added description: "its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius by the intense radiation from its host star"
  • Combined with comma: "...confirmed the planet to be a gas giant, its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius..."
  • "Its atmosphere" = noun
  • "Inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius..." = descriptive phrase

Key Point: Don't use a semicolon or period here because the second part isn't a complete sentence - it's descriptive information that depends on the main clause for its meaning.

Answer Choices Explained
A

giant; its

✗ Incorrect

  • A semicolon is used to connect two complete sentences (independent clauses)
  • "Its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius..." is NOT a complete sentence - it's a descriptive phrase without a main verb
  • "Inflated" here is functioning as a descriptive form (participle), not as the main verb of a sentence
  • Using a semicolon here creates a grammatical error
B

giant, and its

✗ Incorrect

  • The word "and" is typically used to connect two independent clauses or to join coordinate elements
  • The second part isn't a separate independent clause or a coordinate element - it's descriptive information about the gas giant
  • While not strictly ungrammatical, "and" is unnecessary and makes the sentence less precise
  • The SAT prefers the cleaner, simpler construction without the extra word
C

giant, its

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

giant. Its

✗ Incorrect

  • This creates two separate sentences
  • "Its atmosphere inflated to nearly twice Jupiter's radius by the intense radiation from its host star." would be a sentence fragment
  • A complete sentence needs a main verb, but "inflated" is functioning as a descriptive modifier here, not as a main verb
  • This creates a fragment error - a serious grammatical mistake
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