When particles are suspended in liquid (like pollen in a water glass), they will zigzag randomly through the liquid and...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
When particles are suspended in liquid (like pollen in a water glass), they will zigzag randomly through the liquid and collide with one another in perpetuity. This type of random, continuous _____ is known as Brownian motion, can be observed throughout the natural world.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
movement: which
movement, which
movement which
movement. Which
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- When particles are suspended in liquid (like pollen in a water glass),
- they will zigzag randomly through the liquid
- and collide with one another in perpetuity.
- they will zigzag randomly through the liquid
- This type of random, continuous movement [?] is known as Brownian motion,
- can be observed throughout the natural world.
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence sets up the scenario:
- When particles are suspended in liquid (like pollen in a water glass)
- We're talking about tiny particles floating in water or another liquid
- They will zigzag randomly through the liquid and collide with one another in perpetuity
- These particles move in random, zigzag patterns
- They keep bumping into each other
- "In perpetuity" means this keeps happening continuously, forever
Now the second sentence connects to this:
- "This type of random, continuous..."
- "This type" refers back to the movement described above
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They all include "movement"
- But they differ in punctuation: colon-which, comma-which, no punctuation-which, period-which
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- "...is known as Brownian motion, can be observed throughout the natural world."
Now let's really understand what this is telling us:
If I read this straight through with just "movement":
- "This type of random, continuous movement is known as Brownian motion, can be observed..."
Wait - what do we notice about the structure here?
- We seem to have TWO verb phrases:
- "is known as Brownian motion"
- "can be observed throughout the natural world"
- Both are trying to be the main verb, which creates a run-on sentence
But look - all our choices include "which." Let's see what that does:
- "This type of random, continuous movement, which is known as Brownian motion, can be observed throughout the natural world."
Now it makes sense! Here's what's happening:
- The SUBJECT is: "This type of random, continuous movement"
- The phrase "which is known as Brownian motion"
- is giving us extra information - the scientific name for this movement
- It's like a side note - "by the way, this is called Brownian motion"
- This is not the main point of the sentence
- The MAIN VERB is: "can be observed throughout the natural world"
- THIS is what the sentence is really telling us
- This movement can be seen everywhere in nature
So the complete meaning is:
- This type of random, continuous movement (which, by the way, is called Brownian motion) can be observed throughout the natural world.
What do we notice about punctuation?
- The "which" clause is providing additional, non-essential information
- We already know what movement we're talking about (the random, continuous type)
- The "which" clause is just telling us its scientific name
- When a phrase provides extra information like this, it needs to be set off by commas on BOTH sides
- One comma before "which" to open the extra information
- One comma after "motion" to close it (this one is already there!)
So we need: movement, which
The correct answer is B.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Non-Essential Descriptive Clauses
When you add extra information about something using "which," that information needs to be set off by commas on both sides (this type of clause is called a non-essential relative clause in grammar terms). Think of the commas like parentheses - they bracket off bonus information:
Pattern: Noun, which [extra information], verb
Example 1:
- Without the extra info: "The discovery changed scientific understanding."
- With extra info added: "The discovery, which was made in 1905, changed scientific understanding."
- "which was made in 1905" = extra detail about when
- Commas on both sides set it off
Example 2:
- Without the extra info: "My laptop needs repair."
- With extra info added: "My laptop, which I bought last year, needs repair."
- "which I bought last year" = extra detail about purchase
- Commas on both sides set it off
In our question:
- Subject: "This type of random, continuous movement"
- Extra info: "which is known as Brownian motion"
- Just telling us the scientific name - bonus information
- Main verb: "can be observed throughout the natural world"
- Result: "movement, which is known as Brownian motion, can be observed..."
Key distinction:
- "Which" clauses (adding extra info) = need commas
- "That" clauses (essential to identify what you're talking about) = no commas
movement: which
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something that follows - like a list, explanation, or example
- Colons don't work with "which" clauses that provide additional description
- This creates incorrect, non-standard punctuation
- It violates the conventions for connecting descriptive clauses
movement, which
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
movement which
✗ Incorrect
- Without a comma before "which," we don't properly set off the extra information
- The sentence becomes a run-on with unclear structure
- Readers can't tell where the descriptive phrase begins
- It violates the rule that non-essential information needs to be separated by commas
movement. Which
✗ Incorrect
- A period makes these two separate sentences
- But "Which is known as Brownian motion, can be observed throughout the natural world." cannot stand alone
- Phrases beginning with "which" are fragments - they must be attached to what they're describing
- This violates the rule that every sentence must express a complete thought