When scholars first examined the medieval document, its faded script and simple layout suggested it was merely a merchant's inventory....
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
When scholars first examined the medieval document, its faded script and simple layout suggested it was merely a merchant's inventory. Detailed analysis using multispectral imaging revealed the manuscript to be far more significant, _____ contained encoded diplomatic correspondence from the 14th century.
Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?
significant, it
significant; and it
significant. And it
significant, and it
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Sentence 1:
- When scholars first examined the medieval document,
- its faded script and simple layout
- suggested
- it was merely a merchant's inventory.
- suggested
- its faded script and simple layout
- When scholars first examined the medieval document,
- Sentence 2:
- Detailed analysis using multispectral imaging
- revealed
- the manuscript to be far more significant, [?] contained
- encoded diplomatic correspondence from the 14th century.
- the manuscript to be far more significant, [?] contained
- revealed
- Detailed analysis using multispectral imaging
- Where [?] represents what varies:
- A: (comma) it
- B: (semicolon) and it
- C: (period) And it
- D: (comma) and it
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start with the first sentence:
'When scholars first examined the medieval document,'
- This sets up the initial situation - scholars looking at an old document
'its faded script and simple layout suggested it was merely a merchant's inventory.'
- The document looked unimportant - faded writing, simple design
- They thought it was just a merchant's inventory (a list of goods)
- Nothing special
Now the second sentence provides a contrast:
'Detailed analysis using multispectral imaging revealed the manuscript to be far more significant,'
- When they used advanced technology (multispectral imaging) to analyze it more carefully
- They discovered it was actually much more significant than they initially thought
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They vary in punctuation (comma, semicolon, or period)
- And whether the word "and" appears before "it"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'it contained encoded diplomatic correspondence from the 14th century.'
- "It" refers to the manuscript
- "Contained encoded diplomatic correspondence" - it had secret diplomatic messages hidden in it
- This is explaining WHY the manuscript was significant or WHAT made it important
So the complete picture is:
- The manuscript turned out to be far more significant
- It contained encoded diplomatic correspondence
- The second part adds crucial information that explains the first part
What do we notice about the structure here?
- 'Detailed analysis...revealed the manuscript to be far more significant'
- This is a complete thought - it could stand alone as a sentence
- It has a subject (Detailed analysis) and verb (revealed)
- 'it contained encoded diplomatic correspondence from the 14th century'
- This is also a complete thought - it could stand alone too
- It has a subject (it) and verb (contained)
- So we have two complete thoughts that need to be properly connected
When we want to connect two complete thoughts in one sentence, we need proper punctuation:
- We can use a comma + a connecting word like "and"
- We can use a semicolon by itself
- We CANNOT use just a comma alone - that creates an error
Since these two thoughts are closely related (the second explains what made the manuscript significant), we need: comma + and
The correct answer is D: significant, and it
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts in One Sentence
When you have two complete thoughts (each with its own subject and verb, each able to stand alone as a sentence), and you want to include them in a single sentence, you must use one of these proper methods:
Method 1: Comma + Coordinating Conjunction
- Use a comma followed by one of these connecting words: and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet
- Example: "The document looked simple, but it contained secret messages."
- In our question: "revealed the manuscript to be far more significant, and it contained encoded diplomatic correspondence"
Method 2: Semicolon Alone
- Use a semicolon by itself to connect closely related thoughts
- Example: "The document looked simple; it actually contained secret messages."
Method 3: Period (Separate Sentences)
- Make them two separate sentences
- Example: "The document looked simple. It actually contained secret messages."
What you CANNOT do:
- Use just a comma (comma splice error)
- Mix methods incorrectly (like semicolon + and)
In this question: The two parts are closely related - the second explains what made the manuscript significant. Using comma + "and" (Method 1) creates a smooth, logical flow that properly connects these related complete thoughts.
significant, it
✗ Incorrect
- Uses only a comma to connect two complete thoughts
- This creates a "comma splice" error - you can't join two complete sentences with just a comma
- You need either a connecting word (like "and") with the comma, or stronger punctuation
significant; and it
✗ Incorrect
- Mixes two different connection methods incorrectly
- A semicolon can connect two complete thoughts by itself
- But you don't use a connecting word like "and" right after a semicolon in this way
- This creates an awkward, non-standard construction
significant. And it
✗ Incorrect
- Separates the ideas into two sentences by using a period
- While you can start a sentence with "And," doing so here makes the writing feel choppy
- These two closely related ideas flow much better as a single connected sentence
- The connection between them is natural and smooth, so they work better joined together
significant, and it
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.