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GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
When the technology company underwent its major reorganization in 2019, leadership implemented sweeping operational changes. These _____ the consolidation of three regional offices, the adoption of remote work policies, and the integration of artificial intelligence tools into daily workflows.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
transformations, including
transformations would include
transformations, include
transformations included
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Sentence 1:
- When the technology company underwent its major reorganization in 2019,
- leadership implemented sweeping operational changes.
Sentence 2:
- These transformations [?]
- the consolidation of three regional offices,
- the adoption of remote work policies, and
- the integration of artificial intelligence tools into daily workflows.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start with the first sentence:
- 'When the technology company underwent its major reorganization in 2019,'
- This sets up the time and context - a company reorganization that happened in 2019 (past event)
- 'leadership implemented sweeping operational changes.'
- The leadership made big, wide-ranging changes to how things operate
- Note the past tense 'implemented' - this already happened
Now the second sentence:
- 'These transformations...'
- This refers back to those 'sweeping operational changes'
- 'Transformations' is our subject here
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: including
- B: would include
- C: , include
- D: included
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues with:
- 'the consolidation of three regional offices,'
- 'the adoption of remote work policies, and'
- 'the integration of artificial intelligence tools into daily workflows.'
This is a list of three specific things:
- The consolidation (bringing together offices)
- The adoption (taking on remote work policies)
- The integration (incorporating AI tools)
What do we notice about the structure here?
- 'These transformations' is the subject
- But wait - where's the verb?
- A complete sentence needs a main verb to tell us what the subject does or is
- Looking at our list of three items
- These are noun phrases (consolidation, adoption, integration)
- They're not verbs - they're the THINGS that happened
- So the blank needs to provide the MAIN VERB
- It needs to connect the subject 'these transformations' to the list of what those transformations were
- Also notice the time frame
- Everything happened in 2019
- We're talking about past, completed actions
So we need: a past tense verb that serves as the main verb for this sentence.
The correct answer is D: transformations included
This gives us: 'These transformations included the consolidation..., the adoption..., and the integration...'
Perfect! The past tense verb 'included' tells us that these transformations consisted of or were made up of these three specific changes.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Recognizing When a Sentence Needs a Main Verb
Every complete sentence must have a main verb - the verb that expresses the primary action or state of being for the subject. This is especially important to watch for when you have a subject followed by additional information.
The Pattern:
- Subject + Main Verb + Additional Information
Example 1:
- "The new policies, including flexible hours" (Fragment - no main verb)
- "The new policies included flexible hours" (Complete - "included" is the main verb)
Example 2:
- "The company's innovations, featuring AI technology" (Fragment - "featuring" is a modifier, not a main verb)
- "The company's innovations featured AI technology" (Complete - "featured" is the main verb)
In our question:
- Subject: "These transformations"
- Main verb needed: "included" (past tense to match 2019 time frame)
- Additional information: the list of three specific changes
Key distinction: Present participles like "including" or "featuring" function as modifiers (they describe), not as main verbs (they don't express the primary action). When you see "-ing" words, ask yourself: "Is this the main action of the sentence, or is it just adding description?"
Tense matching: Once a passage establishes a time frame (like "in 2019"), your verbs should match that time frame. Past events need past tense verbs ("included"), not conditional forms ("would include") or present tense ("include").
transformations, including
✗ Incorrect
- "Including" is a present participle that functions as a modifier, not as a main verb
- This would leave the sentence without a main verb: "These transformations, including the consolidation..."
- Creates a sentence fragment - incomplete thought
transformations would include
✗ Incorrect
- "Would include" is conditional - it suggests something hypothetical or a future possibility
- But the first sentence clearly establishes these changes happened in 2019 (definite past event)
- Creates a mismatch between the established past time frame and the conditional mood
transformations, include
✗ Incorrect
- The comma before "include" creates a punctuation error
- If "include" is meant to be the main verb, it shouldn't be separated from its subject by a comma
- Also, "include" is present tense, which doesn't match the past time frame (2019)
- Creates both a punctuation problem and a tense mismatch
transformations included
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.