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While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more ______, others look to the past, developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s. (The term '8-bit' refers to a console whose processor could only handle eight bits of data at once.)

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

lifelike but

B

lifelike

C

lifelike,

D

lifelike, but

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike[?],
    • others look to the past,
      • developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s.

Understanding the Meaning

The sentence starts with a contrasting setup:

  • 'While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike'
    • This tells us what one group of creators is doing
    • They're trying to make graphics more realistic

This is where we have the blank - right after 'lifelike.'

Let's look at the choices:

  • We're deciding between: nothing, "but", a comma, or comma + "but"

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • 'others look to the past'
    • This introduces a different group doing something different
    • They're going in the opposite direction - backwards instead of forward toward more realism
  • 'developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s'
    • This describes how they're looking to the past
    • They're making games with old-school, retro-style graphics

So the complete meaning is:

  • Some creators push for more realistic graphics, while others embrace retro styles from decades ago
  • It's showing a contrast in approaches

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The sentence begins with 'While...' which introduces a dependent clause
    • 'While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike' cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
    • It's setting up background information
  • Then comes the main part:
    • 'others look to the past...' is the main independent clause
    • This IS a complete thought
  • 'While' at the beginning already signals the contrast
    • It means "whereas" - it's already doing the job of showing that these two groups are doing different things

So we need a comma after 'lifelike' - that's it.

  • The comma separates the introductory dependent clause from the main independent clause
  • We don't need "but" because "while" already establishes the contrast
  • Adding "but" would be redundant - we'd be signaling the contrast twice

The correct answer is Choice C: lifelike,


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas After Introductory Dependent Clauses

When a sentence begins with a dependent clause (a clause introduced by words like "while," "although," "because," "if," "when," etc.), you need a comma to separate it from the main independent clause that follows:

Pattern:
[Dependent clause with subordinating word], [independent clause].

Examples:

  • Dependent clause: While some students prefer studying alone
  • Comma needed here
  • Independent clause: others thrive in group settings
  • Complete sentence: While some students prefer studying alone, others thrive in group settings.

Another example:

  • Dependent clause: Although the weather was terrible
  • Comma needed here
  • Independent clause: the game continued as scheduled
  • Complete sentence: Although the weather was terrible, the game continued as scheduled.

In our question:

  • Dependent clause: "While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike"
  • Comma needed: after "lifelike"
  • Independent clause: "others look to the past..."
  • Why no "but"? The word "while" already signals the contrast, so adding "but" would be redundant

Key point: Introductory dependent clauses (also called subordinate clauses in grammar terms) need a comma to show where the introduction ends and the main statement begins. This comma acts as a natural pause point between the setup and the main message.

Answer Choices Explained
A

lifelike but

✗ Incorrect

  • Missing the comma that's required after an introductory dependent clause
  • "But" is redundant since "while" already signals the contrast between the two groups
  • Creates awkward structure
B

lifelike

✗ Incorrect

  • Missing the necessary comma after the introductory clause
  • Without punctuation, the dependent clause runs directly into the independent clause incorrectly
  • Violates the standard rule for punctuating introductory clauses
C

lifelike,

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

lifelike, but

✗ Incorrect

  • While it correctly includes the comma, the "but" is unnecessary
  • "While" at the beginning already establishes that we're contrasting what some creators do versus what others do
  • Adding "but" signals the contrast a second time, creating redundancy
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