While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more ______, others look to the past, developing titles...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more ______, others look to the past, developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s. (The term '8-bit' refers to a console whose processor could only handle eight bits of data at once.)
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
lifelike but
lifelike
lifelike,
lifelike, but
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike[?],
- others look to the past,
- developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s.
- others look to the past,
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts with a contrasting setup:
- 'While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike'
- This tells us what one group of creators is doing
- They're trying to make graphics more realistic
This is where we have the blank - right after 'lifelike.'
Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding between: nothing, "but", a comma, or comma + "but"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'others look to the past'
- This introduces a different group doing something different
- They're going in the opposite direction - backwards instead of forward toward more realism
- 'developing titles with visuals inspired by the '8-bit' games of the 1980s and 1990s'
- This describes how they're looking to the past
- They're making games with old-school, retro-style graphics
So the complete meaning is:
- Some creators push for more realistic graphics, while others embrace retro styles from decades ago
- It's showing a contrast in approaches
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The sentence begins with 'While...' which introduces a dependent clause
- 'While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike' cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
- It's setting up background information
- Then comes the main part:
- 'others look to the past...' is the main independent clause
- This IS a complete thought
- 'While' at the beginning already signals the contrast
- It means "whereas" - it's already doing the job of showing that these two groups are doing different things
So we need a comma after 'lifelike' - that's it.
- The comma separates the introductory dependent clause from the main independent clause
- We don't need "but" because "while" already establishes the contrast
- Adding "but" would be redundant - we'd be signaling the contrast twice
The correct answer is Choice C: lifelike,
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas After Introductory Dependent Clauses
When a sentence begins with a dependent clause (a clause introduced by words like "while," "although," "because," "if," "when," etc.), you need a comma to separate it from the main independent clause that follows:
Pattern:
[Dependent clause with subordinating word], [independent clause].
Examples:
- Dependent clause: While some students prefer studying alone
- Comma needed here
- Independent clause: others thrive in group settings
- Complete sentence: While some students prefer studying alone, others thrive in group settings.
Another example:
- Dependent clause: Although the weather was terrible
- Comma needed here
- Independent clause: the game continued as scheduled
- Complete sentence: Although the weather was terrible, the game continued as scheduled.
In our question:
- Dependent clause: "While many video game creators strive to make their graphics ever more lifelike"
- Comma needed: after "lifelike"
- Independent clause: "others look to the past..."
- Why no "but"? The word "while" already signals the contrast, so adding "but" would be redundant
Key point: Introductory dependent clauses (also called subordinate clauses in grammar terms) need a comma to show where the introduction ends and the main statement begins. This comma acts as a natural pause point between the setup and the main message.
lifelike but
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the comma that's required after an introductory dependent clause
- "But" is redundant since "while" already signals the contrast between the two groups
- Creates awkward structure
lifelike
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the necessary comma after the introductory clause
- Without punctuation, the dependent clause runs directly into the independent clause incorrectly
- Violates the standard rule for punctuating introductory clauses
lifelike,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
lifelike, but
✗ Incorrect
- While it correctly includes the comma, the "but" is unnecessary
- "While" at the beginning already establishes that we're contrasting what some creators do versus what others do
- Adding "but" signals the contrast a second time, creating redundancy